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Sun Jul 04, 2010 3:24 pm
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MiaParamore says...



Will get to it after Wednesday or before it. Though after option seems more probable. :)
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Mon Jul 05, 2010 4:38 pm
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MiaParamore says...



Well, I reviewed your stuff TL-g.

*coco: Working on yours.

~Shubhi
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Thu Jul 15, 2010 1:41 pm
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MiaParamore says...



The reviews for *coco's Of Loss and Love are in top progression. Only two more chapters are left out of ten. So, guys I am accepting requests again. So just throw them at me again. :)

~Shubhi
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Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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Fri Jul 30, 2010 11:25 am
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MiaParamore says...



So, I have completed *coco's novel, and I am open again for business. :) Request me for novel reviews.

~Shubhi
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Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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Tue Aug 03, 2010 2:14 pm
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LigerTiger10 says...



Can you review the first two chapters of The Protector it's in sub form Action/Adventure. Thanks.
Don't really have one........
  





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Wed Aug 04, 2010 2:22 pm
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Shearwater says...



Oh my god, you're like...super fast, Shubhi!
Could you review mine? Pretty please? :3
It's only the first two chapters and is still under progression and editing so any help is greatly appreciated!
Taboo
Thanks ahead of time!

~PInk
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Fri Aug 06, 2010 3:36 pm
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MiaParamore says...



Hey Liger and Pink. Thanks for the request and I am through with first chapters of both of your novels. I would do your next, Pink. Coz' I am superfast.

~Shubhi
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Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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Sat Aug 07, 2010 6:08 pm
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MiaParamore says...



All set and done. Coz' I am superfast. :wink:

Anyone else who wants to test me?
~Shubhi
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Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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Sun Aug 08, 2010 7:01 pm
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Hecate says...



Hey! This is the beginning of a novel, and it's a bit sketchy. Have a look and see if you can help me out.

topic68036.html

Thanks in advance! ^_^

If you see this before you start editing, please edit this instead:

topic68060.html

It's the same thing, only edited, with a bit more added to it. Still, if you didn't see it, and you already did the first one, that's fine too ;) Thank you soo much!
  





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Wed Aug 11, 2010 2:26 pm
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MiaParamore says...



All set and done, Stel, though it's the longest time I have taken to complete a review on request. Curse tests! :(

Anyone else? I swear I won't take this long. Get on, and give me some requests.
8)
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Fri Aug 13, 2010 1:50 pm
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Hecate says...



Well, it's not someone else, but I did love your last review and I have edited my chapter completely. Would you like to have a look? By the way, did your test go okay?

topic68241.html
  





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Sat Aug 14, 2010 7:10 am
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MiaParamore says...



Stella, I did the review, and I am back for doing more reviews. Hurray! Throw in more requests. :)

~Shubhi
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Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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Tue Aug 17, 2010 1:31 am
Shearwater says...



Hey, Shubs, it's me again :)
I finished the next chapter for Taboo and was wondering if you could stop by and review it whenever you have time.
Thanks in advance!
topic68367.html

~Pink
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Wed Aug 18, 2010 2:25 am
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xXTheBlackSheepXx says...



Hi!! I'd love if you reviewed the first three chapters of my General Fiction novel, Elyse. I could really use a second opinion :)
Here you go:
Ch.1
viewtopic.php?t=67387
Ch.2
viewtopic.php?t=68003
Ch.3
viewtopic.php?t=68164

Thanks a bunch!!
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Wed Aug 18, 2010 8:54 pm
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pudin.junidf says...



Hey Shub!!

So I was wondering if you could review this for me please.
I's called Blood in the Sunrise
Thanks you very much.
Les sanglots longs
Des violons
De l'autonne
Blessent mon coeur
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Monotone.

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