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Sat Apr 28, 2012 2:34 pm
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Shearwater says...



Whaaa =D
I posted chapter three of Exo.

Thankyousomuch, dear. <3xinfinity
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Mon Apr 30, 2012 1:12 pm
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MiaParamore says...



All done! :wink:

Anyone else?


Edit: I didn't review Jalmoc's since I have zero clue about Star Wars. (I know I might as well be the dumbest person on Earth).
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Mon Apr 30, 2012 2:44 pm
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xDudettex says...



Yes please, Mia. I'll love you more than I already do if you review this for me. It's chapter two part one of 'Unbroken'.

And I promise I'll send you some more songs to motivate you :P

work.php?id=94918

:)
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Mon Apr 30, 2012 10:54 pm
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Omni says...



'Ello there! My name on YWS is omniyus. I'm not really new here, but I'm not old here either. I'm kind of in between and my work is starting to get into those "forgotten" bookshelves, especially my new work The Heart of a Career.

It is a fanfiction for The Hunger Games, through Glimmer's point of view. I hope you like it, there are 3 chapter that I have posted so far, but I have done 6. work.php?id=94885 Hope you enjoy.
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Fri May 04, 2012 3:55 am
Ikerot says...



Miiaaaaaa

work.php?id=94726
Part two of the first chapter of From Where We Started
:3
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Thu May 10, 2012 11:48 pm
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UFO says...



I'd appreciate it. Your reviews are in depth and critical, just the way I need to be reviewed.

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Sat May 12, 2012 12:58 pm
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Caesar says...



Heya Mia!!! <3
Please review this work.php?id=95252
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Tue Jun 05, 2012 10:16 am
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MiaParamore says...



Alright, guys!

I'm opening up again. So post your requests. But there's just this one thing-I won't review FanFic and poetry.
"Next time you point a finger
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Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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Wed Jun 06, 2012 1:43 am
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Threnody says...



Hello! I was wondering if you could please review this. It's a short story and should be relatively quick. I will most definitely return the favour!

Thanks,
Threnody
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Fri Jun 08, 2012 11:41 am
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MiaParamore says...



Done! :)

Anyone else? :wink:
"Next time you point a finger
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Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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Sun Jun 10, 2012 11:21 am
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MiaParamore says...



I wanna review. No one out there wants anything to be reviewed?
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Next time you point a finger
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Thu Jun 14, 2012 11:59 am
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MiaParamore says...



So no one wants a review? I know you do, folks. :wink:
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore
  





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Fri Jun 15, 2012 12:22 am
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UFO says...



This may actually be fun. It's not really up for review, per say, in the sense that it's not a written piece of work. But it is a piece of technology that could be used/viewed by everyone. I wouldn't mind if you looked at it and gave some details about what you feel it does, helps with, or needs.

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Fri Jun 15, 2012 1:27 pm
MiaParamore says...



Done!
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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Mon Jun 18, 2012 3:50 pm
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MiaParamore says...



Please, guys! I'm desperate to review. Any one?
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore
  








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