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Fri Jan 07, 2011 11:20 pm
ErBear says...



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Thanks!

(PS- this is a story done completely in my main character Anna's POV. I'm also trying to wor out some flashbacks into the story.)

Thanks again!

Taylor
~formerly Ilovebubbles123

"There's only one thing
to do
three words
for you.
Ooh, I love you.

There's only one way
to say
those three words
that's what I'll do.
Ooh, I love you. "

For you.
  





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Tue Jan 11, 2011 12:46 pm
MiaParamore says...



Done.. FINALLY! ^_^
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore
  





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Fri Jan 14, 2011 11:27 am
MiaParamore says...



Come on, no one? :wink: I know you want some.
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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Fri Jan 14, 2011 2:26 pm
iceprincess says...



Shub, would you mind if you helped me review my piece for Skins's contest? I know you are going to judge it soon, but I think I need all the reviews I can get, so. Pwease? :P
you'll never find another sweet little girl with sequined sea foam eyes
ocean lapping voice, smile coy as the brightest quiet span of sky
and you're all alone again tonight; not again, not again, not again.
and don't it feel alright, and don't it feel so nice? lovely.


  





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Mon Jan 17, 2011 1:55 pm
MiaParamore says...



All done, I am accepting more requests, but you'd have to wait a while. Like two-three days?
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore
  





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Mon Jan 17, 2011 7:24 pm
LadySpark says...



hi Shubs,
here to request a review, its a novel (6. chapters so far) and I would love a review! I don't care how ya do it, but I don't really need nit-picked..
novel.php?id=976
hush, my sweet
these tornadoes are for you


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Formerly SparkToFlame
  





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Mon Jan 17, 2011 11:33 pm
RacheDrache says...



Shrubs! Ni ni ni!

Or, I guess that should be me me me! As in, please review for me, please? I'd love your thoughts on this. It's the fourth chapter of my novel, but there's a "What you need to know" included at the top, and honestly, because I don't plan out novels ahead of time, not much has happened anyway.

But I would so love your thoughts on the matter. I'll even bribe you with...with... a steaming mug of homemade peppermint hot chocolate!!

Many thanks even if you just consider it!

Rach
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Have you thanked a teacher lately? You should. Their bladder control alone is legend.
  





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Sat Jan 22, 2011 3:20 pm
MiaParamore says...



All set and done. Rachael removed her piece, so couldn't review that , but I'll review it when she asks me to. And I am done with Pointy. I can't believe my speed.
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore
  





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Sun Jan 23, 2011 6:48 am
MiaParamore says...



Guys, feed me. My shrubs are going to die otherwise. I mean, water me! :smt002
"Next time you point a finger
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Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore
  





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Tue Jan 25, 2011 9:51 am
MiaParamore says...



It's been too long. Feed me requests. :wink:
"Next time you point a finger
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Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore
  





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Thu Jan 27, 2011 12:25 pm
borntobeawriter says...



I am feeding you! I haven't requested anything because I didn't want to bother anyone, but no one's reviewing. Would you, please?

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Sat Jan 29, 2011 11:21 am
ArcticMonkey says...



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There is the link to Codra. Please and thank you!
Someone told me there's a girl out there, with love in her eyes and flowers, in her hair.
  





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Sat Jan 29, 2011 12:03 pm
MiaParamore says...



Tanya, all set and done! Tams, I'll get to you ASAP! :wink:
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore
  





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Mon Jan 31, 2011 6:14 pm
MiaParamore says...



Done! ^_^
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore
  





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Mon Jan 31, 2011 6:19 pm
Button says...



Can you please review this short poem for me?
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It'd be greatly appreciated. :)
Thanks!
  








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