Young Writers Society

Cirque de la grammaire est ouvert officiel!

TRANSLATED: Circus of Grammar is officially open!

Yes, I am a crazy speaking french girl and I am willing to give any of you who wish it, a free review. (I don't think you can get paid for it anyway) I am new, but I hope that doesn't discourage you because I'll place all my time and effort into reviewing your chapters or stories.

What I would rather review:

Fantasy
Murder/Crime
Art
Assignment

What I can review:

Romance
Poetry

In other words, I'll review practically anything unless it is very visual on the romantic side or something abusive towards something else.

Alors laissez la grammaire de fixation, de commencer!

Hi, I'm looking for some comments on my fantasy "book"
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Does that spark your interest?

I'm done that piece for you, Boss. Is there anyone else who would fancy a review?

My brother has this one story thing... it's really geeky, but can you look it over? He would love any comments you have. It's a sci fi/comedy that concerns YWS being taken over... by the French! I know... plot twist!

Snoink's brother's story: novel.php?id=232

Speaking of sci fis! This one has strong language sometimes (nothing gory or sexual, mind you, just language), so if you don't want to critique it, that's fine! However, I would like to have someone else to prod the writer into posting more stuff... and the more help I can have, the better!

(Yes, I am evil.)

Anyway, this is set in the future. Journalism is dead, so when Leander gets stuck in the career of journalism, she expects to settle down in a boring life where she will be pushed around endlessly by people of power. However, all of this comes crashing down when, on a school field trip, she accidentally discovers an android named Hero. Hero, knowing that his inventors want to destroy him, offers Leander a proposition: either she rescues him or she dies. Not willing to die, Leander hastily agrees... and finds herself trapped in an action-packed adventure full of speed boats, political turmoil, and general chaos.

OR AT LEAST THAT WOULD BE THE SUMMARY IF SHE FINISHED IT. *flails*

So yeah. You should try to get her to post more. XD

Leander's Story: novel.php?id=269

And! Because we love zombies! There was another novel on YWS which was pretty much pure awesomeness and I'm trying to persuade the writer to write more. xD This one is soooooo funny. I was laughing when I first read it! Imagine: a bunch of teenagers who look on the news and find out that zombies are supposedly attacking this one particular town. All the adults are gone... so are zombies really there or is this just a part of an elaborate hoax? It sounds generic... trust me. It's hilarious. So you should comment on it and threaten to tickle EAHailstone if she doesn't write more. XD

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Also! Watch out. You may get poetry requests, lol.

Done! All three.

I am also prepared for your poetry, just got to get my english book that has all the terminology written down and I'm ready to go.

Mwhahaha... in that case...

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^ School assignment concerning Adolf Hitler!

Done! Anything or anyone else up for a review?

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^ I was going to critique this after finals (AHH! Only a couple more days!) but you can do it now!

Je suis fait à l'examen, Snoik! Quelqu'un d'autre veut un examen, ou est leur autre chose que je peut faire pour vous Snoik.

Translated: I am done with the review, Snoik! Does anyone else want a review, or is their anything else I can do for you Snoik.

Sorry, I'm trying to show of my French speaking skills. That and Mum is forcing French into me again.

Hey there, would you mind reviewing this? It's the first chapter of what may hopefully one day be a novel XD Just setting up one of the main characters right now, but I'd like to know what you think of the style or of the character himself.
Thanks!

PS: "Je suis fait à l'examen" --> "I am used to the exam". The sentence you're looking for is "J'ai fini le commentaire/de commenter" XD

Ha ha, I didn't even look over what I wrote, that was pretty stupid of me. But anway, thank you Jagged for picking up on that and I have done your review for you. Sorry for the late reply, Mum was using the computer all afternoon yesterday.

Anyway, is anyone else interested in a review. I'll be happy to do it on any context.

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Thank you

Done, with your review Lena! I hope that I did everything you suspected.

Does anyone else want a review, I'm open 24/7! Okay that's a lie, when I'm sleeping my computer is taking care of it....but that means robber can easily come in! NOOOOOOO

If you want to do one for me before you go that would be completely wonderful!! post719654.html#p719654 thanks in advance!!

Done, Austen. I hope that it good and helps you in your writing adventure. Is there anyone else looking for a review? I'm happy to do anything.