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Cirque du la grammaire est ouvert officiel! (Open)



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Sun Jun 13, 2010 10:33 pm
austenite says...



Cirque wrote:Done, Austen. I hope that it good and helps you in your writing adventure. Is there anyone else looking for a review? I'm happy to do anything. :D


It will do! Merci!
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Wed Jun 16, 2010 8:32 am
Cirque says...



Does anyone want a review. I'm open all night...and day! :D





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Sun Jun 20, 2010 10:41 am
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Puffycherry says...



Hello,

I am currently writing a new fantasy novel and would truly appreciate if you'd review the first chapter.

Information:

Genre: Fantasy
Title: Ecole des Monstres
Link: post724784.html#p724784

Thanks, in advance.
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Sat Jun 26, 2010 8:21 am
Cirque says...



I've done it! It won't let me post on your page, so I sent it to you through pm! Hope you get it and that it helps! Anyone else want a review...please! :D





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Sat Jun 26, 2010 1:34 pm
peanut19 says...



Do you think you could review my story God's Mistake? Here's the link to part two, which is what I need reviews on. In the post there's a link to the first part, if you just want to read it then review the 2nd part. Thanks! topic65938.html
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Thu Jul 01, 2010 4:26 am
Cirque says...



This is madness! Nobody wants me, Cirque, to do an honoured review for them. The crimson jester! You should be ashamed!

Now, make ammends and ask me for a review! :lol:





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Fri Jul 02, 2010 5:24 pm
Twit says...



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If you would be so kind, please. :)
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Sat Jul 03, 2010 6:52 am
Cirque says...



Finished TLG! Does anyone else want a review?





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Fri Jul 09, 2010 7:49 pm
LibbyLovesDrums says...



What about mine?
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Sun Jul 11, 2010 9:26 pm
Cirque says...



Sorry for the late reply. I was away from the computer for a while, though I'm happy to report that I've finished your review, Libby. :)

Does anyone else want a review?





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Sun Jul 11, 2010 9:36 pm
Sins says...



Heya Cirque. :)

I'm not sure if you'll be willing to, but could you review a chapter of my story? It's, like, chapter seven so I understand if you don't want to. :lol: If you want to understand it completely, you would have to scan through the previous chapters. You don't really need to though, you can concentrate more on the structural and grammatical stuff.

post737447.html#p737447

Thanks in advance!

xoxo Skins
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Sun Jul 11, 2010 9:52 pm
Cirque says...



Done Skins. Does anyone else wanna review?





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Fri Jul 23, 2010 11:00 am
Sins says...



Could you review the next part of my story please...?

topic67306.html

Thanks in advance :)
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Mon Jul 26, 2010 3:41 am
Flower~Child says...



Would you mind reviewing my poem? topic67459.html
Also I am going to take French this year, I might message you one day saying, HELP ME I AM FAILING FRENCH haha.
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