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Thu Jul 01, 2010 4:55 pm
zankoku_na_tenshi says...



Sure! JulNoWriMo just started for me, so it might be a sec, but I'll get to it as soon as I can. : )
"The world is not beautiful, therefore, it is." --Kino's Journey

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Thu Jul 01, 2010 6:20 pm
SuperSquirrel says...



Hello! Can you review my first YWS novel "55th Floor"? The Sci-Fi category is a little misleading, it is written in the style of Fahrenheit 451 (dystopian futuristic novel).

Your fellow Pokémon fan,
SuperSquirrel





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Thu Jul 01, 2010 6:21 pm
zankoku_na_tenshi says...



Sure! As soon as I can. ^_^
"The world is not beautiful, therefore, it is." --Kino's Journey

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Fri Jul 02, 2010 5:53 am
zankoku_na_tenshi says...



The Chaos chapter 2 review is up and posted, the others I'll get to soon. ^_^
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Fri Jul 02, 2010 2:37 pm
MasterofChaos says...



Thank you so much!
I no longer update here. I rewrote my story entirely. So long and thanks for all the fish!





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Tue Jul 06, 2010 10:28 pm
MasterofChaos says...



Hello... It's me again. *smiles nervously*

I am terribly sorry if I am being a bother, but can you review this?

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Again, I am so sorry if I am a bother.
I no longer update here. I rewrote my story entirely. So long and thanks for all the fish!





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Tue Jul 06, 2010 10:33 pm
Munchkinzizzles says...



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Romantic short story. :D I hope that's okay.
Writing...writing is beyond amazing. Writing is imagination on paper. I love writing more than I can express.





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Tue Jul 06, 2010 10:34 pm
zankoku_na_tenshi says...



Sure! I'll get to both of them soon, since I have this afternoon and tomorrow off work. I've got to review shubhi's and SuperSquirrel's stories first, though. ^_^
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Wed Jul 07, 2010 1:45 pm
ultraviolet says...



Hi Zan! Will you please review the first chapter of my new novel? Please and thank you! Anti Amnesia - Chapter 1
"Blah blah blah. You feel trapped in your life. Here is what I am hearing: happiness isn't worth any inconvenience."

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Wed Jul 07, 2010 10:57 pm
screamandshout says...



Hey would you mind reading one of my short stories?

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Please and thank you.





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Thu Jul 08, 2010 5:09 am
zankoku_na_tenshi says...



I've finished 55th Floor and all eight chapters of A Criminal's Heart. Chaos, ulterviolet, and screamandshout's reviews are coming up! ^_^
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Fri Jul 09, 2010 7:02 am
zankoku_na_tenshi says...



The review for Anti-Amnesia is up! Unfortunately, I'll be out of town until Sunday afternoon, but I plan to get screamandshout and Chaos's reviews done then-- I'm really sorry, guys. ;_; My job has been kind of a pain this week.
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Wed Jul 14, 2010 5:17 am
zankoku_na_tenshi says...



Chaos and Munchkinzizzles's reviews are all done, I'll get to screamandshout's next! ^_^ So sorry all these took so long. :(
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Thu Jul 15, 2010 6:07 am
zankoku_na_tenshi says...



All the reviews are done-- thanks for your patience, everyone, I hope I helped you out. ^_^
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Tue Aug 17, 2010 4:40 am
ultraviolet says...



Hi! I was wondering if you could review Leave Out All The Rest for me. Pretty please, with a cherry on top? :P
"Blah blah blah. You feel trapped in your life. Here is what I am hearing: happiness isn't worth any inconvenience."

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