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Thu Aug 12, 2010 6:29 pm
RacheDrache says...



Hi Calligraphy!

I'm requesting a review for "What She Liked," a short-story/nonfiction/prose poetry sort of deal. It's very short (maybe five paragraphs) and I'd love to get your thoughts on it! post751919.html#p751919

Thank you! :D
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Fri Aug 13, 2010 6:27 pm
NYCnightowl007 says...



Hi there! Could you please review either one of my chapters in my novel Bikes and Books? novel.php?id=550 Thank you!
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Sat Aug 14, 2010 2:12 am
Calligraphy says...



I am so sorry you guys I only have 5 minutes on the computer. I will review both on Monday. :D

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Sat Aug 14, 2010 3:05 am
Bookwormart says...



Hello AS. I have a novel with three chapters (and still going). post752526.html#p752526 I need some criticism and just some comments that you can make. Thanks!
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Mon Aug 16, 2010 5:37 pm
Calligraphy says...



RachaelElg - done.

Bookwormart - done.

Again I only have a short time on the computer, but I promise I will get yours done tomorrow.

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Tue Aug 17, 2010 12:11 am
seeminglymeaningless says...



Hey :) This piece isn't mine, but it has hardly any reviews, and it's a REALLY good story in terms of plot. I would really like some attention drawn to it, so could you please review it?

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Mon Aug 30, 2010 6:55 am
SilentRain says...



Well, try this, it is a poem... topic68879.html
topic68479.html <---- Click here to have your poems reviewed!

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Wed Sep 01, 2010 7:55 pm
Calligraphy says...



This is closed! I have decided to make a new one for my new account as Calligraphy. I know it is a little late, but I just realized that I couldn't edit what I will review. :D

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Wed Jun 21, 2023 6:29 am
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Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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