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Poetry critiques anyone? [accepting]



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Wed Jun 02, 2010 1:01 am
Adnamarine says...



What I critique:
Poetry
Poetry
aaand poetry.

If you post a story, all I can promise is that I'll read it and see what jumps out at me to comment on, but poetry is really my best area, and you won't necessarily get a review if it's not poetry. Generally you'll be much better off making your prose requests in another thread.

Unless you request otherwise--or other things become a factor (length/quality)-- my poetry reviews will be detailed and in depth (in fact I'll probably print it out and scribble all over it, before formulating it into something intelligible). If you need your critique in a hurry I'll do my best to accommodate you. In general, however, it can take up to (hopefully no longer than) a week.

Other than that:
-please only one request at a time
-please provide a link
-please let me know if there's something specific you want me to pay special attention to
-I accept peaches, dark chocolate, and fluffy blankets ;)

Request away!
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Fri Jun 11, 2010 8:59 pm
Vanadis says...



*hands a peach.*

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Tue Jun 15, 2010 5:00 pm
Calligraphy says...



Would you review my poem for word choice? It is called Today is one of those days

Thankyou <3

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Tue Jun 15, 2010 8:17 pm
jemjive says...



Hey Adna! Here you go. :smt003

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Tue Jun 15, 2010 8:28 pm
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Van, yours is complete!
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Thu Jun 17, 2010 4:54 pm
Kale says...



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Anything and everything you spy, but comments especially on the hyphenation would be appreciated.
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Fri Jun 18, 2010 12:27 am
Adnamarine says...



All done, Calligraphy.
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Sat Jun 19, 2010 1:41 am
Waterlilygirl says...



Can you please Review: Baby, I love you
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Thu Jul 01, 2010 3:08 am
HorseradishCares says...



*taps*
Could I get a review, please?
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Nothing specific because, I'd like to know how it is overall, I guess. :)
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Fri Jul 02, 2010 5:27 pm
ArcticMonkey says...



Heya Adna!
Could you please review this for me? Seeing as you like to review poetryhttp://www.youngwriterssociety.co ... 66325.html


Thanks in advance!!!
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Fri Jun 16, 2023 11:47 am
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