and i'm not in a hurry so you just take as long as you need.
thanks!!!
The talent of an amazing writer, they can convey any emotion, make you feel thing's you've never felt, and help you understand that which you thought you never would.
I know this is random, but when you said that you "heard a rumor" that I like to review, did someone suggest me, or did you see some of my previous reviews, or what?
Oh, and I'm working on your review. I desperately hope that you are not easily offended, because consider it torn to pieces (at least what I've done so far). I think this will be my harshest review, but I think it will also be my most helpful, if you take criticism well, and are willing to learn and change certain aspects of your writing.
Anyways, that is all.
"Blah blah blah. You feel trapped in your life. Here is what I am hearing: happiness isn't worth any inconvenience."
hmmm, just a little nervous. but no I'm all for change if it makes me better. and I'm not easily offended so you should be fine!
The talent of an amazing writer, they can convey any emotion, make you feel thing's you've never felt, and help you understand that which you thought you never would.
I'm probably making it sound worse than it is. Anyways, still working on it. I have a fairly short attention span, so I took a break and had dinner and played Guitar Hero with my brother. But now I'm back at it, better than ever.
"Blah blah blah. You feel trapped in your life. Here is what I am hearing: happiness isn't worth any inconvenience."
You reviewed the first chapter of one of my novels, would you be able to review the second for me? I love your reviews, you always seem to catch the bits that I miss when proof reading!! topic67412.html
I will eviscerate you in fiction. Every pimple, every character flaw. I was naked for a day; you will be naked for eternity. Chaucer, A Knight's Tale
Deceiving others. That is what the world calls a romance. Oscar Wilde
Sure guys, I'll get right on it. Prosithion, sorry it's taking so long. I've been busy lately, and working on getting caught up on reviews, writing, and all that little stuff you have to do that ends up taking longer than the big stuff. Anyways, I'm working on it now.
"Blah blah blah. You feel trapped in your life. Here is what I am hearing: happiness isn't worth any inconvenience."
Pro, yours is done. The other two might take a few days, though, because a friend is staying with me for a few days, and I might not be able to get on long enough at a time to finish them. I'll try, though, and get them out as soon as possible.
"Blah blah blah. You feel trapped in your life. Here is what I am hearing: happiness isn't worth any inconvenience."
Okay, so I was having computer problems, which is why I haven't gotten the reviews done. But I'm going to work on them now. My computer is fixed. Anyways, sorry, and thanks for your patience. (If you still have any, that is.)
"Blah blah blah. You feel trapped in your life. Here is what I am hearing: happiness isn't worth any inconvenience."
Hey, guys, sorry I haven't been doing these. My mind's been really fogged lately, and writer's block has overtaken me. Like, big time. I can't even write a simple review; I'm ashamed to say I haven't written a decent one in like three weeks. If you still want the reviews, I'll do them. Again, I'm really sorry. I am going to force myself to do them. And I think I'm heading out of my funk.
loveness, dia
"Blah blah blah. You feel trapped in your life. Here is what I am hearing: happiness isn't worth any inconvenience."
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