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Tue Jun 01, 2010 2:54 am
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Closed.
Last edited by ultraviolet on Fri Sep 03, 2010 4:06 am, edited 1 time in total.
"Blah blah blah. You feel trapped in your life. Here is what I am hearing: happiness isn't worth any inconvenience."

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Sat Jun 05, 2010 7:51 am
Apple says...



Hey Ultra! I thought I'd be the first to start off your utopia with a little story I haven't really paid attention to in a long time. So, if you'd ever be so kind; couple you please, pretty please with an Apple on top, review this fantasy chapter.
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Sun Jun 06, 2010 2:05 pm
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Apple, theboss, done. :) I'm ready for more. 8)
"Blah blah blah. You feel trapped in your life. Here is what I am hearing: happiness isn't worth any inconvenience."

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Fri Jun 11, 2010 3:13 am
Jas says...



Would you review my poem Welcome to Hell? For some reason my computer isn't letting me get the link D: It's in my profile :) Please?
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~





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Fri Jun 11, 2010 3:15 am
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I don't really know much about poetry, but I'll do my best. :)
"Blah blah blah. You feel trapped in your life. Here is what I am hearing: happiness isn't worth any inconvenience."

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Fri Jun 11, 2010 3:19 am
Jas says...



Thanks :)
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~





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Fri Jun 11, 2010 3:25 am
ultraviolet says...



Jasmine, done. :) Bring on some more.
"Blah blah blah. You feel trapped in your life. Here is what I am hearing: happiness isn't worth any inconvenience."

~asofterworld.com





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Fri Jun 11, 2010 3:34 am
Jas says...



Thanks for the review! :)
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~





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Fri Jun 11, 2010 5:12 pm
austenite says...



Ultraviolet, I always love reading your reviews, can you do my latest? post719654.html#p719654 Thanks in advance!
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Deceiving others. That is what the world calls a romance.
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Fri Jun 11, 2010 6:43 pm
ultraviolet says...



Thanks! :) And done. Anyone else?
"Blah blah blah. You feel trapped in your life. Here is what I am hearing: happiness isn't worth any inconvenience."

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Mon Jul 19, 2010 12:01 am
Adeera says...



HIIIIII person with the cool avatar

anyway i heard a rumor that you like reviewing stuffz and i was wondering could you review my stuffs and tear it to pieces

thank! <3
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"Not all who wander are lost."
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Mon Jul 19, 2010 2:12 pm
ultraviolet says...



Adeera, is there any specific pieces you want me to do, or just any and all? Oh, and you heard right. I do like reviewing stuffs. :D
"Blah blah blah. You feel trapped in your life. Here is what I am hearing: happiness isn't worth any inconvenience."

~asofterworld.com





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Mon Jul 19, 2010 6:19 pm
Adeera says...



well you are welcome to do any that you want but I'm currently putting emphasis on my story "whispered strength"

thank girl!!
The talent of an amazing writer, they can convey any emotion, make you feel thing's you've never felt, and help you understand that which you thought you never would.

"Not all who wander are lost."
Tolkien





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Mon Jul 19, 2010 7:19 pm
ultraviolet says...



Okay! I'll get right on it. Mind you, it might take a while. I tend to explain why punctuation's wrong, and give reword examples, and stuff like that that, and it makes me take a while. But I AM working one it. :)
"Blah blah blah. You feel trapped in your life. Here is what I am hearing: happiness isn't worth any inconvenience."

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