If possible, could you review the latest part of my novel? I have a feeling that you've critiqued parts of it before... I'm not sure. It's not the best chapter in the world, so I need all the critiques I can get. If you don't want to review it, that's fine. It is the seventh chapter! If you do review it, reading the previous chapters would help but it's not completely necessary.
Hey Danie, I'm writing a novel right now (one I'm serious about) and was wondering if I could get some of your spectacular insight, lol. I'm four chapters in but I wanted some more constructive critiques before I decide to write the next chapter. Can you help me out? Here's the link: novel.php?id=507 Thanks in advance!
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There are three rules for writing a novel. Unfortunately, no one knows what they are. -W. Somerset Maugham
Oh sure. I don't think I've seen you around before, but here's something to review anyway. Can you please review The Ghostmaster at: page.php?id=761
Thanks in advance,
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"A superman ... is, on account of certain superior qualities inherent in him, exempted from the ordinary laws which govern men. He is not liable for anything he may do." Nathan Leopold
Oops. That should be:http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post782578.html#p782578
"A superman ... is, on account of certain superior qualities inherent in him, exempted from the ordinary laws which govern men. He is not liable for anything he may do." Nathan Leopold
It's pretty short so it shouldn't take too much time. Thanks in advance!
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