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Sun Jan 02, 2011 3:50 am
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Kyllorac says...



Finished with: Gen, Seph, Rosey

Working on: psudiname
Screwing with gender since 1995.
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Mon Jan 10, 2011 9:30 pm
Pocket says...



Hi again :)

I was wondering, if you randomly find yourself with some time and boredom, could you please take a peek at this poem?
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It would be greatly appreciated :)
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Sat Mar 26, 2011 9:37 am
Error404 says...



Hello Kyllorac, how are you?
Recently, I've drawn a picture and I would really appreciate it if you were to review it. :)
Take your time and don't feel compelled to write an excessive amount of detail either!
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=78202

Thanks a bunch,
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Thu Apr 14, 2011 2:39 pm
ehte92 says...



Hello there.

Could you review this poem?

Thank you. :D
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Fri Apr 15, 2011 3:19 am
fireheartedkaratepup says...



This one: viewtopic.php?t=79137 and this one: viewtopic.php?t=78907

No hurry, I just want as much feedback as possible on the first and.......am struggling to improve the second.

I know they need work. Do your worst. ;)
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Mon May 30, 2011 2:21 pm
DakotaK says...



Hiya!
I was trying to find someone to review the partial novel I have posted and in the past I have always enjoyed your in-depth reviews, that's what I need, not two sentences saying yay or nay, lol. If you get a chance to go over it that would be amazing, thank you!

novel.php?id=1142

~DakotaKnight
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Looking for peeps to review my novel:)

novel.php?id=1142
  





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Tue May 31, 2011 2:30 am
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KatTrain says...



post865072.html#p865072

pleaassee and thank you!
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Sun Jun 19, 2011 2:40 pm
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DakotaK says...



Hi there! I'm a huge fan of your reviews and I need someone to really tear apart a piece for me. Don't worry, this one isn't like my novel it's only 1,000 words, lol!

post874941.html#p874941

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Wed Jul 20, 2011 5:21 pm
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Nightshade says...



Hi Kyllorac,
would you be willing to take a look at my newest poem, Airbag? Any help on it would be greatly appreciated.

Thank you so much.
  





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Thu Jul 28, 2011 6:26 am
joshuapaul says...



Hey Kyllorac,

If you could have a look at something for me, that would be great.

Its for a contest due on the 30th, no pressure though, whenever is fine.
topic84974.html

Thanks in advance,

JP
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Thu Jul 28, 2011 7:28 pm
crescent says...



Hi Kyllorac. Could you please review this fantasy novel for me. I've written two chapters so far and could really use some insight. I need a harsh-ish review. Thanks. If you don't have time, one chapter is fine.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/novel.php?id=1682

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Wed Aug 31, 2011 12:59 pm
Twit says...



Hey Kyllorac!

This is for a contest due in on Friday 2nd, so if you wouldn't mind being harsh, I'd very much appreciate it. :)
topic86855.html
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Wed Aug 31, 2011 6:10 pm
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Kagi says...



Hey, an untimely review would be wonderful please!

If you can manage it. viewtopic.php?t=86924
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Sat Sep 03, 2011 9:01 am
Pocket says...



Hiya, Kyll---

I was wondering if you could please take a look at this poem for me. I'd really, really appreciate it. :)

Thanks!

~Persy
  








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