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Mon Mar 30, 2015 1:06 am
haven235 says...



Tied

Thanks.
  





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Mon Mar 30, 2015 2:40 pm
LadySpark says...



don't break hearts, break minds

Please and thank you, my darling <3
hush, my sweet
these tornadoes are for you


-Richard Siken


Formerly SparkToFlame
  





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Thu Apr 02, 2015 5:22 pm
paula08 says...



Can you review this poem for me please?

Placebo

-me
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Thu Apr 02, 2015 6:20 pm
Kale says...



Lots of poem requests.

Finished haven's, working on Spark's, and paula's is queued.

And done.
Secretly a Kyllorac, sometimes a Murtle.
There are no chickens in Hyrule.
Princessence: A LMS Project
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Thu Nov 05, 2015 10:36 pm
Kale says...



Still open.
Secretly a Kyllorac, sometimes a Murtle.
There are no chickens in Hyrule.
Princessence: A LMS Project
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Fri Nov 06, 2015 1:07 am
Lightsong says...



Can you please review this novel sub-chapter? Link: Bad Lights, Good Lights [Chapter 4.3] Thanks. :)
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Sun Nov 15, 2015 7:53 pm
Lavenderfields says...



Hi, although I see you're not a fan of romance, I thought I'd give it a shot and ask for your review. I tried to keep it from becoming cheesy as much as possible.
I am looking for a review on the first bit of a novel. Would really appreciate your feedback! On The Way To Eternity
  





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Sat Nov 28, 2015 6:01 pm
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Kale says...



Just a note that I'm working on your story @Lavenderfields. I just have to get through the queue of requests people made outside this thread. >.>
Secretly a Kyllorac, sometimes a Murtle.
There are no chickens in Hyrule.
Princessence: A LMS Project
WRFF | KotGR
  





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Sat Jan 02, 2016 7:37 am
Karzkin says...



Bruh.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

K's Killa Kritiques

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Tue Jan 05, 2016 5:09 am
Kale says...



Done, even though this thread is supposed to be closed. ._.
Secretly a Kyllorac, sometimes a Murtle.
There are no chickens in Hyrule.
Princessence: A LMS Project
WRFF | KotGR
  





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Wed Jan 06, 2016 6:27 am
Karzkin says...



I don't play by no square man's rules.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

K's Killa Kritiques

#TNT

All Hail the undisputed king of the YWS helicopter game.
  





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Wed Jan 06, 2016 7:12 pm
Kale says...



I'll have you know I'm more like a rectangular prism.
Secretly a Kyllorac, sometimes a Murtle.
There are no chickens in Hyrule.
Princessence: A LMS Project
WRFF | KotGR
  





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Tue Aug 15, 2017 9:50 pm
Kale says...



Newly reopened after many years of closure!
Secretly a Kyllorac, sometimes a Murtle.
There are no chickens in Hyrule.
Princessence: A LMS Project
WRFF | KotGR
  





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Mon Sep 25, 2017 9:02 pm
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ExOmelas says...



Hey, here via your request on discord. I started this novel recently, but also recently became very very busy. The upside of this is that if you (like one of the other reviewers, who I really trust) also think this is getting off to a rocky start, it may well make sense for me to just start it again later when I have less going on.

The Ballad of the Brenerit Curfew - Chapter 1

What fools these mortals be!
William Shakespeare
A Midsummer Night's Dream


Who cares if one more light goes out?
Well I do.

Linkin Park
One More Light


  





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Fri Sep 29, 2017 7:31 am
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Dracula says...



This story isn't that important to me but if you need something to review... Inter-dimensional Hide and Seek
It's a short story aimed at kids, about some kids who are not at all phased by the existence of a portal to another dimension.
I bought a cactus. A week later it died. I got depressed because I thought Damn, I am less nurturing than a desert.
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