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Wed Jun 16, 2010 2:26 am
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Kale says...



And I am finished.
Secretly a Kyllorac, sometimes a Murtle.
There are no chickens in Hyrule.
Princessence: A LMS Project
WRFF | KotGR
  





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Wed Jun 16, 2010 6:19 am
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Rascalover says...



topic65374.html

Thats the link for chapter 17 of my Let Me Love you Romantic novel and I would love it if you could review it?

Thanks and have a great day,
Tiffany
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

Who needs a review? :) http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38078.html
  





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Wed Jun 16, 2010 7:46 pm
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Kale says...



And finished.
Secretly a Kyllorac, sometimes a Murtle.
There are no chickens in Hyrule.
Princessence: A LMS Project
WRFF | KotGR
  





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Wed Sep 29, 2010 5:37 pm
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I have to wonder if my user title has scared away all potential requestors. Four months without requests of any sort? Uncanny.
Secretly a Kyllorac, sometimes a Murtle.
There are no chickens in Hyrule.
Princessence: A LMS Project
WRFF | KotGR
  





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Thu Sep 30, 2010 10:06 am
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Lava says...



Hi Ky!

Could you take a look at this for me? topic70056.html It's poetry.

<3 Thanks.
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Pretending in words was too tentative, too vulnerable, too embarrassing to let anyone know.
- Ian McEwan in Atonement

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Thu Sep 30, 2010 9:00 pm
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Kale says...



Done and done.
Secretly a Kyllorac, sometimes a Murtle.
There are no chickens in Hyrule.
Princessence: A LMS Project
WRFF | KotGR
  





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Fri Oct 01, 2010 1:54 pm
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SilentRain says...



Hello, this is a poem. I guess it would fall Horror... well here it is... topic70088.html

Thanks a bunch,

~Rain~
topic68479.html <---- Click here to have your poems reviewed!

Theres always a rainbow after the Rain!!!!!!!
  





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Sat Oct 02, 2010 3:41 am
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Elinor says...



Hey Kyl. :)

Could you review this for me: topic70133.html

It's just a little flash that I wrote (In general fiction). Thanks!

All our dreams can come true — if we have the courage to pursue them.

-- Walt Disney
  





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Sat Oct 02, 2010 8:46 pm
Reuben A says...



EY please review my Canonoscuridad Part 1 :)

Its a fantasy novel :D
So stadig loop ons deur die pers Jakarandas wat val,die bome word kaal Pa staar na die beeld van Botha wat reis op sy perd,Hy wonder was bloed soveel werd.Soveel jare dra hy aan die naam van 'n plek,Soveel jare moet ons nou laat gaan,Is die naam dan so erg,so bitter en sleg?Hoekom gooi jul dit weg?
  





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Sat Oct 09, 2010 11:03 pm
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blackbird12 says...



Hey there, Kyllorac! Would you mind reviewing this poem for me? Thanks in advance!

topic70448.html
If I had wings, I would have opened them.
I would have risen from the ground.

-Mary Oliver
  





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Wed Dec 29, 2010 2:55 am
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GenShawklan says...



Hi Kyllorac! :) Could you please review When the Sand Runs Out for me? Thanks so much!
"Stop being defined by what people think of you." - Glee

"Dare to be different; if you blend in, no one will ever notice you. It's the unique ones they remember."

Please review one of my writings (preferably All I Know of Hate) and I'll return the favor! :)
  





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Fri Dec 31, 2010 12:19 am
psudiname says...



hmm, I should try making that my signiture. anyways, could you review my first four chapters of a novel I'm working on? It's posted in seperate chapters, and since I'm not sure what a novel's main page is, could you just post your cumulative review on the fourth chapter? it's an action adventure novel. thanks, the link to the first chapter is here, further links are at the end of each chapter.
topic73681.html
if anyone wants a review, post on my profile and I'll get to it in a couple days.
  





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Fri Dec 31, 2010 3:49 pm
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Button says...



Hi there :)
So, I was wondering if you could please take a look at this: topic74039.html
It's poetry.
If you find yourself stretched for time or anything, feel free to completely disregard it.
Thanks.

-Coral-
  





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Sat Jan 01, 2011 5:17 pm
Rosendorn says...



Well you look just a bit overloaded. xD

I go dialogue-nutty here. Please make sure all of that dialogue reads smoothly, and isn't melodramatic. :P
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