z

Young Writers Society


(Un)Timely Reviews



User avatar
32 Reviews



Gender: Male
Points: 374
Reviews: 32
Mon Mar 30, 2015 1:06 am
haven235 says...



Tied

Thanks.
  





User avatar
355 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 2099
Reviews: 355
Mon Mar 30, 2015 2:40 pm
LadySpark says...



don't break hearts, break minds

Please and thank you, my darling <3
hush, my sweet
these tornadoes are for you


-Richard Siken


Formerly SparkToFlame
  





User avatar
43 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 426
Reviews: 43
Thu Apr 02, 2015 5:22 pm
paula08 says...



Can you review this poem for me please?

Placebo

-me
If you want a review for any of your works, post the link of your work in this thread: Need a Review? [Back in Action]
  





User avatar
1220 Reviews



Gender: None specified
Points: 72525
Reviews: 1220
Thu Apr 02, 2015 6:20 pm
Kale says...



Lots of poem requests.

Finished haven's, working on Spark's, and paula's is queued.

And done.
Secretly a Kyllorac, sometimes a Murtle.
There are no chickens in Hyrule.
Princessence: A LMS Project
WRFF | KotGR
  





User avatar
1220 Reviews



Gender: None specified
Points: 72525
Reviews: 1220
Thu Nov 05, 2015 10:36 pm
Kale says...



Still open.
Secretly a Kyllorac, sometimes a Murtle.
There are no chickens in Hyrule.
Princessence: A LMS Project
WRFF | KotGR
  





User avatar
472 Reviews



Gender: Male
Points: 25
Reviews: 472
Fri Nov 06, 2015 1:07 am
Lightsong says...



Can you please review this novel sub-chapter? Link: Bad Lights, Good Lights [Chapter 4.3] Thanks. :)
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin
  





User avatar



Gender: Female
Points: 462
Reviews: 3
Sun Nov 15, 2015 7:53 pm
Lavenderfields says...



Hi, although I see you're not a fan of romance, I thought I'd give it a shot and ask for your review. I tried to keep it from becoming cheesy as much as possible.
I am looking for a review on the first bit of a novel. Would really appreciate your feedback! On The Way To Eternity
  





User avatar
1220 Reviews



Gender: None specified
Points: 72525
Reviews: 1220
Sat Nov 28, 2015 6:01 pm
View Likes
Kale says...



Just a note that I'm working on your story @Lavenderfields. I just have to get through the queue of requests people made outside this thread. >.>
Secretly a Kyllorac, sometimes a Murtle.
There are no chickens in Hyrule.
Princessence: A LMS Project
WRFF | KotGR
  





User avatar
89 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 1028
Reviews: 89
Sat Jan 02, 2016 7:37 am
Karzkin says...



Bruh.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

K's Killa Kritiques

#TNT

All Hail the undisputed king of the YWS helicopter game.
  





User avatar
1220 Reviews



Gender: None specified
Points: 72525
Reviews: 1220
Tue Jan 05, 2016 5:09 am
Kale says...



Done, even though this thread is supposed to be closed. ._.
Secretly a Kyllorac, sometimes a Murtle.
There are no chickens in Hyrule.
Princessence: A LMS Project
WRFF | KotGR
  





User avatar
89 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 1028
Reviews: 89
Wed Jan 06, 2016 6:27 am
Karzkin says...



I don't play by no square man's rules.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

K's Killa Kritiques

#TNT

All Hail the undisputed king of the YWS helicopter game.
  





User avatar
1220 Reviews



Gender: None specified
Points: 72525
Reviews: 1220
Wed Jan 06, 2016 7:12 pm
Kale says...



I'll have you know I'm more like a rectangular prism.
Secretly a Kyllorac, sometimes a Murtle.
There are no chickens in Hyrule.
Princessence: A LMS Project
WRFF | KotGR
  





User avatar
1220 Reviews



Gender: None specified
Points: 72525
Reviews: 1220
Tue Aug 15, 2017 9:50 pm
Kale says...



Newly reopened after many years of closure!
Secretly a Kyllorac, sometimes a Murtle.
There are no chickens in Hyrule.
Princessence: A LMS Project
WRFF | KotGR
  





User avatar
760 Reviews



Gender: Other
Points: 31396
Reviews: 760
Mon Sep 25, 2017 9:02 pm
View Likes
ExOmelas says...



Hey, here via your request on discord. I started this novel recently, but also recently became very very busy. The upside of this is that if you (like one of the other reviewers, who I really trust) also think this is getting off to a rocky start, it may well make sense for me to just start it again later when I have less going on.

The Ballad of the Brenerit Curfew - Chapter 1

What fools these mortals be!
William Shakespeare
A Midsummer Night's Dream


Who cares if one more light goes out?
Well I do.

Linkin Park
One More Light


  





User avatar
802 Reviews

Supporter


Gender: Female
Points: 18884
Reviews: 802
Fri Sep 29, 2017 7:31 am
View Likes
Dracula says...



This story isn't that important to me but if you need something to review... Inter-dimensional Hide and Seek
It's a short story aimed at kids, about some kids who are not at all phased by the existence of a portal to another dimension.
I bought a cactus. A week later it died. I got depressed because I thought Damn, I am less nurturing than a desert.
-Demetri Martin
  








This is a message to all you out there. You don't have to be the fastest writer. You don't have to write 2000 words in one sitting. But if you put your mind to it and really love your project, you can and will get further along than you ever thought possible.
— FireEyes