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Wed Oct 18, 2017 5:58 pm
LizzieH3 says...



Can you review my poem The Worry Child ? I'm looking for ways to improve the poem but also improve my general writing skills. Thanks
  





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Sat Oct 21, 2017 2:17 am
Samk642 says...



Working on an novel. Would you review the latest chapter? It is a Sci-Fi. The Darknesses Resurgence Chapter 4
  





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Sun Oct 22, 2017 12:08 am
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Kale says...



Done and done!
Secretly a Kyllorac, sometimes a Murtle.
There are no chickens in Hyrule.
Princessence: A LMS Project
WRFF | KotGR
  





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Tue Oct 31, 2017 10:10 pm
Lumi says...



all you need (is the ever-breaking heart)

I bought you a strop to help.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.
  





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Thu Jan 18, 2018 12:50 am
Kale says...



Done with Lumi's.

Need to finish this one: The Teal Knight
Secretly a Kyllorac, sometimes a Murtle.
There are no chickens in Hyrule.
Princessence: A LMS Project
WRFF | KotGR
  








And then, as if written by the hand of a bad novelist, an incredible thing happened.
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