Young Writers Society

Reviews for novels and novellas!

Because it's much more fun.

I'll give chapter by chapter reviews on any Novel / Novella, finished or not. Any genre, any length.

My reviews generally include; characters, plot, readability, entertainment value, and whatever else comes to mind. I can also do line-by-lines.

Just post a link to you main novel/novella page, along with anything else you want to mention or request. Then I'll pm you when I'm done with each chapter.

Note: I tend to be more blunt and less polite to review spammers, so be warned if you already have a lot of reviews by request.

All reviews are free. If you've already requested, you'll find your review progress here \/

Review Progress:

Skins - Stop and Stare - In progress.
Soulkana - Violet Saga - Pending.
Dreamwalker - Night in Love - Pending.
KJR - Vrasess - Pending.
UnicornNerd - The Shift - Pending.

Heya Tenyo

Will you review this for me? It is rather long though... is that okay? If not, that's fine. I understand if you don't want to do it

Thanks in advance,

xoxo Skins

Hey there Tenyo
My novel is called Luna. It's fantasy fiction, and I hope you like it.
I would like a general review because line to line reviews seem too tedious for what I want.
PM me if you need anything.

~Danie

Hi Tenyo. I have seen many of your reviews here and there, and its so much cool that you came up with this idea as many of the reviewers reject reviewing novels. that's so much sweet of you.

I would love a review for my novel 'A Criminal's Heart'. The link is in my signature. Review whatever you like and I would like to know if it sounds realistic or not.

HAve a great time!

Thanks.

Hi! Uh, yeah.
Anyway, could you please review my novel in progress? It's called Saved on the Killer Mountain? The second chapter is a bit lengthy, but if you could review any of the novel, that would be great. I don't really care what kind of review you do. You can go wild if you like. I have no preferences and find both types helpful, so yeah. Thanks!
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(I almost forgot the link...)


-Emily

Yo,
a general review of short novella Planetfall on Albaid please topic64093.html
I say 'general', but if you see lines which beg for... whatever it is they beg for - super, I'd love that too

:O! I love you! Seriously, it's so kind of you to offer to review novels, as most reviewers don't do them. ^^ Well, could you please take a look at my story? It's a fantasy/adventure one, but more fantasy at the moment. I hope you enjoy it. C:
Thank you so much!
~Emma

Could you review the first chapter of my fantasy novel---Antheya? Thanks!

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Hi!
could you please do a general review on my novel, Lone Wolf?
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thanks in advance!

Hey, I'm back in business!

Any requests?

Yo, Tenyo! ZOMG, that rhymes.

Despite responding to this, like, straight after your post, don't worry, I'm not stalking you. I just happen to stalk new posts. Anyways, yay! I'm glad you've opened this again. You're a great reviewer.

Would you be willing to review my current general fiction novel for me? On some chapters, especially the first few, I have some good reviews already, so I hope that's okay. Another one can only help, eh? >.<

Here's the link: novel.php?id=915

Please and thank you!

Will you read this http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=79462 if you have time please?

Seeing as your back in business, is Fantasy up your alley?

Please review my Science fiction Novel, the Shift. Kthnxbai

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