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Wed Mar 09, 2011 12:39 am
XxMattxX says...



Would you ever be so kind as to review my new entry? It's a prologue, so it's not too long.
Here is a link....
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Thanks a lot!
Really appreciate it!
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Sun Mar 13, 2011 1:22 am
Yuriiko says...



Done!
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Tue Mar 15, 2011 1:43 pm
Azila says...



Heya, Yuri! Wanna check out my new fantasy short story for me? (Warning: it's a bit abstract.) Here's a chunk of eternal gratitude in return.
  





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Wed Mar 16, 2011 10:44 am
Wolferion says...



Cheers Yuri! Long time no see =) I'm back with whole new project and guess what? I'd love you to take a look :)

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic77668.html

Thanks and best wishes,
Kyou~
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Sat Mar 26, 2011 6:18 pm
Yuriiko says...



DONE! At last! 83
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Sat Mar 26, 2011 11:50 pm
Ranger Hawk says...



Heya sis! I know you're a great reviewer, so I was wondering if you could take a look at this for me. Thanks! :D
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Sun Mar 27, 2011 4:09 pm
Yuriiko says...



done! ^^
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Fri Apr 01, 2011 12:53 pm
Jalmoc says...



Hi there! :D please review! It's fantasy/action. :D viewtopic.php?t=77669
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Sat Apr 02, 2011 2:50 am
Yuriiko says...



Done! ^^
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Sat Apr 02, 2011 8:58 pm
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I'd be happy if you could review this post841635.html#p841635
It's called Dear Inspiration and the genre is other, thanks XD

~Tinkem
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Mon Apr 04, 2011 1:43 pm
MiaParamore says...



Yuri! I need your help again! :D

Could you possibly review this? I'd love your views on this.

It's another re-write of Turning the Tables, but the start is entirely different so it wouldn't be repetitive to read again! Please and thank you soo much! :wink:
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Tue Apr 05, 2011 5:54 pm
Yuriiko says...



Done!
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Thu Apr 28, 2011 6:13 am
Yuriiko says...



*bump*

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Thu Apr 28, 2011 6:26 am
ScrtSolstice says...



I'm looking for a harsh edit for approximately 40 pages of a story for an assignment which is due on May 1st. Last minute I know but if you are available or have the time I would appreciate it. One my of my editors backed out last minute due to exams.

Its a rough rough draft, of what is shaping into a young adult fantasy novel, but I would like to polish it up a little bit if possible, and is in word format which I can email to you if you think you have the time. You can email me at scrt.solstice@gmail.com and I can respond with the file. Let me know. Either way thanks for reading my long winded reply. :D
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Fri Apr 29, 2011 6:14 am
Yuriiko says...



Hello ScrtSolstice,

I only review short stories or chapter-by-chapter novels. I couldn't make it through this weekend since I would be very busy. And even if I have time today, I am not sure if I can review the entire of it in less than twenty four hours. Also, is that a novella? I think there is a forum here called Advanced Critique. A place where a whole book (meaning all chapters) can be reviewed by a user. You can request it there. Sorry. >.<

And yeah, I'm still accepting requests! <3
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