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Tue May 11, 2010 6:22 am
Yuriiko says...



Hello everyone!

I'm Yuri and I will review for food, specifically pizza!

Boy do I have like the most spontaneous childlike WRRF title thread ever. It vomits rainbows and unicorns. <3

Okay. So, it has been almost six years a long time since I created this thread. Time flies so fast, I feel old. How I review back then may be quite different now I think... I don't know or maybe it's the same but pretty sure, I've toned down my addiction of emojis.

I accept fiction. General, Romance, Teen, Sci-Fi, Fantasy. Everything. You name it. I'm not great with poetry, but I will try my (very) best to give a proper constructive review. And oh, please provide the link of your piece.

Well forget about the pizza. I just love getting requests and notifications.

So I think that's it. Any request is greatly enthusiastically welcomed!



BONUS. If you're curious, this is how my first WRRF format looked like:

Spoiler! :
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Tue May 11, 2010 12:50 pm
MiaParamore says...



Hey, would you review my novel-A Criminal's Heart. And I'll be ready to wai even if tis for a century. Although I've many reviews so it would be easier for you and just do whichever chapters you wanna do. Okay? but I think you;ll need to read whole story so as to comment on plot.:D

Thanks Yuri!

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Tue May 11, 2010 7:06 pm
Luvzi12 says...



Hi there! Would you review my story please? I'm looking for really in-depth reviews as it's an important uni project. I've had some good feedback so far, but would love some more!
Here's the link:
topic63471.html

Thanks so much, Emma.
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Wed May 12, 2010 3:53 am
LauraElizabeth says...



viewtopic.php?t=63499

That's the link to my poem. If you wouldn't mind reviewing it? It's really short and it's fanfiction for Tolkien's The Children of Hurin. But don't feel bad if you decline =D Have a good day!
  





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Wed May 12, 2010 8:12 am
Yuriiko says...



hello guys!

Thanks for those requests. Give me time to review those, okay?

Shubhi- The review's done though I went for the prologue first 'cause so that it would be a lot easier for me to understand the first chapter. Would that be okay for you? I might give a review for the first chapter. 8)
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Wed May 12, 2010 9:27 am
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I'm done with the reviews, Luvzi and Laura! :D
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Wed May 12, 2010 11:57 am
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Done with the first chapter, Shubhi! :D
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Wed May 12, 2010 12:41 pm
MiaParamore says...



Thanks a lot dear! :D
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Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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Wed May 12, 2010 12:58 pm
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Thanks so much for reviewing mine! :D
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Thu May 13, 2010 7:23 am
Yuriiko says...



C'mon guys! Please don't hesitate to ask for one! :3
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Fri May 14, 2010 2:52 pm
MiaParamore says...



Hi there. You would be the last person I would ask help for this part. :P his is a Historical Fiction Novel which I had been working on earlier but left it halfway. i'm planning of starting it again. if you can help, that would be a great help. Its not totally history but general fiction. i'm planning to move it to General Novels.

Seems like Eternity {ch-1}

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Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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Sat May 15, 2010 4:17 am
smashles says...



Hi Yuri I'm smashles and I have this Fantasy Novel that I'm writing. One of my frinds has gone over it, plus I got someone else to review it for food... but it's edited now and I need another opinion! It's called Misty Eyes here's the link: post689163.html#p689163
If you don't want to review it (as it may be a bit long or something) I understand. So just put whatever :)
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Sat May 15, 2010 1:26 pm
eab10 says...



Hi! Uh, I'm writing a novel, and it's under general fiction. It's titled Saved on the Killer Mountain. Could you please review it? I mean, it already has like two reviews, but it would be nice to have more feedback. Thanks!

topic62850.html (chapter 1)
topic63231.html (chapter 2)

Chapter two is a bit lengthy, and I'll understand if you don't feel like reading through it, but thanks if you review anything!

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Sat May 15, 2010 3:36 pm
Yuriiko says...



Shubhi and Smashles- I'm done! weee!

Emily- I'm working on it. :D
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Sun May 16, 2010 8:25 am
MiaParamore says...



Hey there. Here asking for reviews. Can you review this?Love has no boundaries I would review for you if you like.

~Shubhi
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Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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