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So! I decided that I want to review more things to balance out my other posts. I can review anything, basically, except for maybe art and photography, and maybe poetry. But anything fiction I can most definitely review.

I want to tell you in advance thanks for anything, and remember, I may not be able to give a great review on poetry and artsy stuff, but I will accept it and do my best.


Let the reviewing..... begin!

hi ninjacookies! I've been wanting a few more opinions on the first 3 chapters to a vampire story i've been writing. they don't have to be really in-depth reviews, but just whatever you think when you read them. I've hit a bit of a block, and i'd like to know if the chapters i have are interesting enough to write more on. thanks so much for your help!

here they are
viewtopic.php?t=61462
viewtopic.php?t=62254
viewtopic.php?t=62745

Hey, could you please review this? Beginning of a novel, very short

viewtopic.php?t=63128

Thanks.

Hi ninjacookiemonster! I'm hoping to get a few more reviews for Wings, the new novel I've started. Here's links to the first two chapters. Please give honest criticism!

viewtopic.php?t=64016
viewtopic.php?t=63978

Hey If you have a chance before tomorrow, please review my work:
topic64127.html

Sadly it's not finished But hopefully after someone has looked over it I'll be inspired to finish.

Thank you! Emma x

Hi! Do you think you could review the first chapter of my fantasy novel, Antheya? Thank you! (Link is in signature).

Hi there!
I've written a short story and it'd be great if you could review it for me:) Here's the link:

topic64249.html

Thanks! Casey

Ninja!!
Hi!
I was just wondering if you could give this a run-through? I might not get to read it till later as I'm away till Monday, but it would be much appreciated!
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hey!

please review

topic64098.html

Hello. I was hoping you would review my little intro for me- it needs a lot of work. I hope you will when you get the time!

Thanks in advance.

Oh, and the link is in my signature.

Hi! I was just wondering if you could review this for me? It's a little longer than I usualy post, but hopefully it's interesting enough to be worth it! Thank you. (Once you start reading it, don't worry, it's for school so it doesn't get horrible or anything.)

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic64517.html
Thank youu

Hi!
could you please review the first chapter of my novel, Lone Wolf?
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thanks in advance!
ps. if you have the time, it would be great if you could do the other chapters too

Huggles coming up! You like fiction, so here goes. My story is called For the Love of God. As you can probably tell it's a Romantic Novel. I just posted Chapter 2 earlier today and no one reviewed it. Sniff. Sniff. So If you're interested, here's the link for chapter 2: viewtopic.php?t=64560 and pretty much the first thing in the post is a link to Chapter 1. Thanks a lot!

Sarebear

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