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Tue Apr 27, 2010 5:13 am
lilymoore says...



Hello all, Lily here and I’m itching to do some reviewing.
All you need to do is post a link, the name of your piece, and the genre and I’ll get back to you quick as I can.

I’ll review almost anything, really, I will but I have to say that I’m not the best at reviewing poetry but I’m getting better at it than I was before I got here so if nothing else, I’ll give you the best opinion I can.

And if that doesn’t persuade you…there’s a cookie in it for you and possibly a gold star too. *slaps a gold star on her forehead*

~lil
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Tue Apr 27, 2010 3:45 pm
MiaParamore says...



Would you like to review my fashion designs? The link is: Designs!

Thanks in advance!:D
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I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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Wed Apr 28, 2010 12:25 am
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You have been reviewed! *slaps a star on shubhi*
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Sat May 01, 2010 10:35 am
Sins says...



Heya Lily :)

Would you be ever so kind and review this for me please? It's the second chapter of a story, is that okay?

Thanks in advance! If you want me to review something of yours back, just ask!

xoxo Skins
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Sat May 01, 2010 7:17 pm
Rosendorn says...



Hey Lily!

Genre: Fantasy short story
Title: The Knight's Secret
Link(s): Part 1 and Part 2 (It's under 2k, don't be put off by the parts!)
A writer is a world trapped in a person— Victor Hugo

Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.





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Sat May 01, 2010 8:05 pm
Lalaland says...



Hey there Lily.

Could you review my short story for me? There are two parts of it, so could you review the both of them? If it's not too much trouble, that is! :xd: I've had plenty off comments on them, just not really any critiques.

Part one

Part Two

Thanks!
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Tue May 04, 2010 6:51 am
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Hey Lily,
I'm writing a goosebumps story for my little bro, and I was hoping you'd be able to review the 3 part for me. :)

topic62583.html

Thanks! :)
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This awesome post bought to you by me. :)





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Tue May 18, 2010 4:30 am
lilymoore says...



So, after being silly and forgetful, I managed to catch up on all my review requests!

And I'm out of school now, which means I can review forever and ever and ever...well...when I'm not working and sleeping...and showering (I've heard taking your computer into the shower is bad on it).

Request Away!
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Thu May 27, 2010 11:04 pm
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*bump*
:D
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Fri May 28, 2010 12:41 am
CaseySaz says...



Hi there!
I've written a general kind of short story and I'd be really grateful if you could review it for me.:) Here's the link:

topic64249.html

Thanks a ton! Casey





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Fri May 28, 2010 6:26 pm
lilymoore says...



Donesies!
Any more! Bring it on!
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Wed Jun 23, 2010 2:23 am
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*bumps...again*
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Wed Jun 23, 2010 6:15 am
Auteur says...



Hiii :) Would you mind reviewing this for me:
viewtopic.php?t=65723
It's "The Crossfire" and it's a short fiction...aaand.
If you wanted...you could review anything else of mine? Hahah.
Thanks again, bye!
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Wed Jun 23, 2010 6:40 am
radiatemyveins says...



Hello there! If you would be so kind I'd like you to review my poem. I'm not exactly sure what genre it is. Incoherent Blabbering, perhaps. Anyways, here's the link:

post709940.html?hilit=Enter%20the%20Menagerie#p709940

THANKS IN ADVANCE. (:





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Wed Jun 23, 2010 11:26 pm
lilymoore says...



Doneskies!
Any more?
Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.








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