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Thu May 06, 2010 3:32 am
WritingWords says...



Thanks, guys! I'm working my way through the reviews! First come, first serve! :D
To jasminebells, I'm going to try this DARE......slowly....probably after I finished the others first. Is that okay?
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Popularity Wars Chapter Three is now here:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post735878.html#p735878

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Thu May 06, 2010 2:51 pm
Hecate says...



Hey, care to review?

viewtopic.php?t=63128

Its not too long, actually, as to not intimidate people, but I still didn't get anyone who ripped it apart completely.





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Thu May 06, 2010 4:54 pm
WritingWords says...



Whew! I reviewed everything! I can't believe I actually did it! *pats self on back* I finished all these reviews today because I stayed home from school. Just for this. Nahh, just kidding. I was sick. Still, any more reviews to be requested? "Still can't believe I did it, still can't believe, so fast, how..." *fades away as I walk away*
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Popularity Wars Chapter Three is now here:
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Please review!! Love ya!





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Thu May 06, 2010 5:07 pm
Hecate says...



Thanks WritingWords!

I just wanted to point out that it's a real life story and therefore getting rid of the swearing wouldn't make sense, as that's how I remember it. The names were changed for benefits, but the factual details are all the same! Still, I will look into putting more descriptions!

The reason why you don't see the point of it, is because it's the beginning of the novel :)
Still, thank you.





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Thu May 06, 2010 8:19 pm
WritingWords says...



Yeah, glad you understand! Now, anyone else want to get a super, super fast review?
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Popularity Wars Chapter Three is now here:
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Please review!! Love ya!





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Thu May 06, 2010 8:55 pm
Sins says...



Heya! :)

Fancy doing me a review? Could you please review my novel for me? Here's the link to the latest chapter.

topic63089.html

The links to the other chapters are in that. If you don't want to review all of the chapters, that's fine. You can just review the chapter of this link, if you want.

Thanks!

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Sat May 08, 2010 8:21 pm
WritingWords says...



Once again, I finished with all my requests!! Anymore people wanting reviews??
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Popularity Wars Chapter Three is now here:
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Sun May 09, 2010 2:01 am
ToritheMonster says...



topic63160.html

thanks!
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Tue May 11, 2010 12:55 am
Jas says...



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Could you review this please?
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~





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Fri May 14, 2010 12:07 am
WritingWords says...



Done with both requests! Hope you guys like them! I reviewed them to the best of my ability. Now, anyone else?
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Popularity Wars Chapter Three is now here:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post735878.html#p735878

Please review!! Love ya!





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Fri May 14, 2010 1:02 pm
MiaParamore says...



Hi WritingWords. I would love a review from you, actually.
Can you review these for me?

Just 1411 left(NON-FICTION)


Seems like Eternity {ch-1}(HISTORICAL FICTION)
The above mentioned fiction is what I had been working on a months ago but then I dropped it. Thinking of reviving it again. Any help would be useful.


Thanks in advance and when are you posting your next part to the novel?

~Shubhi
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore





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Mon May 17, 2010 11:25 pm
eab10 says...



novel.php?id=150
This is the link to the novel I'm working on. There are only three chapters so far, and it would be awesome if you could read at least chapter one. (Chapter two is pretty lengthy, and chapter three is about the same length as chapter one.)

Thanks!

-Emily :D
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Sun May 23, 2010 2:23 am
wookielover17 says...



Hello Wookie here requesting a review!!! I am kindda hoping that you could review this for me if it's not to much to ask!!!

viewtopic.php?t=61637

And if you still feel like reviewing afterwards and you could review chapter two if you'd like but you don't have too. I would greatly appreciate it!!! :pirate3: (I put I pirate there cuz it looks cool!) :smt003
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Tue May 25, 2010 8:00 pm
LauraElizabeth says...



Do you think you could review the first chapter of my fantasy novel? The link is in my signature. Thank you!





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Fri May 28, 2010 12:49 am
CaseySaz says...



Hello there!
Would you mid reviewing my short story? I've got to patch it up for my creative writing class. Thanks!

topic64249.html

Casey








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