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Mon Apr 26, 2010 9:44 pm
WritingWords says...



I will review ANYTHING.

Did you hear me? ANYTHING. Yep, that's right anything and everything (except for ONE thing).

I will try to make my reviews helpful. In fact, I am desperately looking for people to review, so thank you to all that reply. I will review as soon as possible, and believe me, that is VERY fast. Before you know it, BAM! there's your review on your piece! Again,thanks to all that come to ask for my service! :D

P.S. I just LOVE reading, so you can conclude that I also like reviewing. So post as much of your writing as you can here so I can review it all! :)

P.P.S. Don't think that my reviews are going to be bad quality, because they're not! I spend a lot of time and hard work on them, so don't think wrongly of me...even if I'm young. Just try it out! :D

Things I Review With Particular Pleasure

Fiction, any kind

Scripts

Comedy

Poems

Things I LIKE To Review

Everything

ONE THING I HATE TO REVIEW

Random chapters in a novel
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Tue Apr 27, 2010 1:47 am
Kammara14Mariyln says...



Hi, I'm Kammara. Well, I don't know if you want this bomb dropped on you, but I have this story I'd like you to review. It's about a girl who finds out she has less than a year to live. But more that that...you have to read it..lol.

Here's the link. It's pretty long I know, just do what you can.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic61302.html

~Mara
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Tue Apr 27, 2010 6:05 pm
MiaParamore says...



Would you like to review my fashion designs? The link is: Designs!

Thanks in advance!
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I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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Tue Apr 27, 2010 6:13 pm
Sins says...



Fancy giving some of my work a go? :wink:
It's pretty short so it shouldn't take long.

A Shot of Arrogance

Thanks!

xoxo Skins
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Sat May 01, 2010 2:48 pm
WritingWords says...



Hey, guys! I hope you all like my reviews! I would like more stuff to review though, Anything else someone wants me to look over?
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Popularity Wars Chapter Three is now here:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post735878.html#p735878

Please review!! Love ya!





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Sat May 01, 2010 4:21 pm
deleted3 says...



Me! Me! Me! OK, lemme give you a list in order of most recent to oldest, and you can take your pick from:

A Play:
...Aut Mortatis Conans

A few sketches:
Benca Syx

Calansera

The Faerie Dances

Poetry:
Love From Afar

And a short story!
The Elephant in the Room

I know I'm asking a lot, you don't have to do them all! I'd be thrilled if you review one :-D
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Mon May 03, 2010 1:01 am
BondGirl007 says...



Here can you review this for me? Thanks :D

topic62992.html
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Mon May 03, 2010 9:45 pm
WritingWords says...



Hi, guys! Thanks everybody for your requests! I enjoyed reviewing them a lot. It's wonderful how I can experience different types of literature! Now, does anyone else have anything else to review? :D
Please follow me on all my writing quests by clicking "Follow" on my Profile. Thanks!

Popularity Wars Chapter Three is now here:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post735878.html#p735878

Please review!! Love ya!





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Mon May 03, 2010 10:58 pm
deleted3 says...



well if you get nothing else, you can look back at my list :-D I've added a couple more scenes to my play script since I last posted here as well ...
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Mon May 03, 2010 11:08 pm
Jas says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post698261.html#p698261

Hey could you please review this? Thankies!
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

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Mon May 03, 2010 11:09 pm
Jas says...



Actually I shall give you a dare! I DARE you to review ALL OF MY WORK!! ALL OF IT!! lol, you don't have to if you don't want to but i'll give you 1000 points if you do! :)
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~





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Tue May 04, 2010 1:21 am
ultraviolet says...



Hey, I was wondering if you wanted to review something for me? I've already had Skins review it, but, you know, different opinions can help. Plus, no one's perfect. Anyways, thanks.

It's called "My life as a human dreamcatcher." I have two parts out and hope to have the third out soon. :)

Part 1: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic62089.html

Part 2: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic62274.html

Thanks a ton! :)

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Wed May 05, 2010 1:54 pm
MiaParamore says...



Okay, I think you already have a lot in your kitty to do but if you ever find time, can you review my novel? Its long but if you're free, please try to do it.

The link is in my signature. A criminal's heart.
Turn it down if you like!

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I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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Wed May 05, 2010 5:28 pm
xXTheBlackSheepXx says...



hey i would love another opinion on

viewtopic.php?t=61462

viewtopic.php?t=62254

and

viewtopic.php?t=62745

those are the first three chapters on a story i've started writing, but i've hit a bit of a writer's block and i'm not sure where to go with them. I'd really love some help :D. They have blood and swearing in them, if you're OK with that :)

thanks a ton!
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The good news is we can't make any mistakes.
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Wed May 05, 2010 8:37 pm
sarebear says...



Hi!

I'm Sarebear and I'm pretty new here. I'm writing this story called For The Love of God. Here's the link if you are interested:

viewtopic.php?t=62875

If you prefer poetry, here's a link to a poem called Nine Eleven

viewtopic.php?t=63040

I'd appreciate it if you'd review either or both.

Thanks a lot,

Sarebear
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I lingered round them, under that benign sky: watched the moths fluttering among the heath and harebells, listened to the soft wind breathing through the grass, and wondered how any one could ever imagine unquiet slumbers for the sleepers in that quiet earth.
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