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Hi there! Welcome to my review thread, please feel free to post!

I will review mostly anything, except historical fiction, nonfiction, fanfiction, and action/adventure fiction. I just find them quite boring... Although there are some fanfictions that I do like, depending on the fandom. :]

But what I would review are those under the genres of fantasy fiction, romantic fiction, general fiction, and poetry, as long as the message is light and not too extreme for me to stomach. I'm a bit sensitive to details.

I've had some great experience on critiquing on other sites, so you don't have to worry. You're in good hands, that I'll make sure of. I can also review art, but I am most experienced in drawing manga and anime. Still, I think I'd be able to provide you some artistic aid or some useful piece of advice. :3

I will not guarantee that I can review right away, but I will review as soon as possible. If you asked for it, you're sure to get it. ;]

So there. Have at thee, folks!

Yeah, I have a fantacy novel, which is half-done... WOuld you critique it so far? Here is the link:
novel.php?id=73
The chapters are muddled up a bit, so it says:
chapter 2
chapter 5
chapter 4
Like that, so just remeber to starts not from the first on the list, but chapter one! By the way, there are two chapter one's, so don't click the first on the list, but the second one.
I'm sorry for all the complications, but I can't seem to change it!
Thankyou!
~Tamara

Hi Winter,
I want you to critque something that technically isn't fanfiction. It's my own story, but written in the style of R.L.Stine's Goosebump novels.
Think you can handle it?
I would love if you could review the second part. You might want to read the first part first, though, so you know the storyline, then read the second part and review it.
Here are the links:
post680204.html
post690775.html
Thanks a million!
-Maddy

Hey winter! Love your art by the way. Would it be too much trouble if you reviewed my romance novel? You only need to review the fifth chapter, but you may want to read the fourth to get a sense of context. I'll give you the link for all five chapters. If you choose to review, thank you very much. Otherwise...Thank you anyway! Here's the link to all of my chapters:

novel.php?id=55

Please enjoy it.

Tamara and Maddy, done.

Esther, I'll review yours as soon as possible.

So, is there anyone else wants a review?

Thanks for te review, it really helped!

No problem, kiddo.

Hey Winter. I checked your review for my story. You are really the right person to get work reviewed done.

Can you do more? My same story's other parts need help. Not chapter-1 though but you'll need to read it. So here's the link where you'll find all the chapters to the story.
A Criminal's Heart

Thanks in advance and take your time. let me know if I can help you with anything.

I would really like it if you could review this for me!! It's really short... so yeah!

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@shubi-chan: Which part, specifically?

Hi you reviewed the prologue. So its upto you now what else to review but I think if you want to comment on the storyline then you would wanna look at other chapters too. Review whichever chapter you want. But I need more reviews on the recent ones.

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