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Tue May 11, 2010 5:47 am
Apple says...



Done and Done Jassy! (I hope I can call you that?) So anyway, who is up next! Haven't you noticed, I'm checking this more frequently now!!!!!! So do not be afraid to ask, I'm here to help! :)
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Tue May 11, 2010 12:47 pm
MiaParamore says...



Would you review this? I wrote this a long back and then left it halfway. So I'm planning to work out on it. A review would be helpful.
Seems like Eternity {ch-1}

Thanks~!
~Shubhi
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Next time you point a finger
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Thu May 13, 2010 8:15 am
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Done and Done. Now, who wants one of my awesome and really cool reviews! No one? Well then-I'll just have to go...and...and sit in my corner and CRY! :(

But literally! :| Who wants a review? Don't make me get my cronies on you! Oh, that's it...you better watch out, he's coming after you. :elephant: Yes, yes! He may look like a pink elephant, but don't be fooled. For he is a dancing pink elephant, who can dance his way to others demise!!! Mwuhahahahaha
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Fri May 14, 2010 9:54 pm
Apple says...



Here reviewy, reviewy. Come out, come out where ever you are! :lol:
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Sun May 16, 2010 4:20 pm
pinkangel54123 says...



Would you be willing to do a novel? It's not very long, but I really need some reviews on it. It's fantasy fiction and it's called Luna.

Will you give me a review?
Luna
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Tue May 18, 2010 2:05 am
Kale says...



If it isn't too much to ask, would you mind reviewing what I have posted of my novel The Fox and the Prince? If that's too much, a review on the first half of Chapter 3 would be lovely. :D
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Tue May 18, 2010 8:32 am
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Sure can, I'll try as best as I can.
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Tue May 18, 2010 11:51 am
lilymoore says...



I Could Really Use a Wish Right Now (1 or 2)

It is romance but it's only close to 700 words long and really not all that romantic so I hope that won't turn you away. :D
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Wed May 19, 2010 7:56 am
Apple says...



@PinkAngel; I cannot review all of them, because I'm slightly stretched for time this evening. So I will do the last chapter you have posted and try my best to pick up on stuff. Sorry, if that isn't what you wanted.

@ Kyllorac; I'm on the case!

@Lillymorre; No problem, I'll still do it for you.
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Sat May 22, 2010 10:18 am
MiaParamore says...



Hi there Apple. Would you mind reviewing ch-7 of my novel? You'll find the link in my novel.
Thanks!
~Shubhi
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I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
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Sun May 23, 2010 2:01 am
wookielover17 says...



Um, hi!!! I'm Wookie!! But you probably already figured that out... *cough* Well um I was wondering if you could review this for me:

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I know the concept is weird but it's ok!!! I hope... And if you haven't clawed your eyes out by the end of chapter one could you probably do chapter two? Please? :?
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Sun May 30, 2010 5:58 pm
captain.classy says...



Apple! Wanna review this for me! (:

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Tue Jun 01, 2010 6:58 am
Apple says...



I'll be right on it. Wookie I've done your review and Shubi for some reason I cannot post a reply to yours. It's probably my old, slack and stupid computer because I can do it for everything else. :D I'm terribly sorry, my computer is just being a butt head. If you'd like I can pm you a review?
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Sat Jun 05, 2010 11:01 pm
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Anyone want a review? I think I hear a yes way over there. :D
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