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Sun Apr 11, 2010 3:34 am
whatevr says...



Free reviews, but please, no poetry. I am crap at peotry and if you want a good critique on your piece of poetic marvel, don't come here.

I like reviewing:
Short sotries.
Other fiction.
Sci Fi



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Last edited by whatevr on Wed Apr 14, 2010 2:27 am, edited 5 times in total.
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Sun Apr 11, 2010 3:52 am
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Yay! Review!

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For just one second I felt whole... as you flew right through me.

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Sun Apr 11, 2010 4:06 am
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Hi, would you please review my piece?

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Sun Apr 11, 2010 8:32 am
MiaParamore says...



Hi can you review 'A Criminal's Heart's prologue'.
LINK: A Criminal's Heart-Prologue

Please and thanks in advance.( I used magic words)
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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Sun Apr 11, 2010 9:12 am
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*edited*
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Sun Apr 11, 2010 2:53 pm
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As yu mentioned in the PM here's the request for Chapter-1's review. Please and thank you. I think that's okay now.
A Criminal's Heart Chapter-1(OLIVIA)
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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Sun Apr 11, 2010 11:49 pm
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Done shubhi :)
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Mon Apr 12, 2010 1:49 am
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Mon Apr 12, 2010 4:22 am
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Done
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Mon Apr 12, 2010 7:34 am
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Done, apple :)
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