Young Writers Society

Skins, I've come to depend on your reviews...

I would like the works. Nitpick and overall

First chapter of an old novel.

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This is general fiction. It's just a short intro to a novel I'm working on. I just want to know if it's too heavy/ too much description...that kinda' thing.

Thanks!
-Sop.

Skinsy! May I request a review from you? It's fantasy fiction. A small prologue... I would really appreciate your opinion on it.
Little Macey.
Thank you! (:

Yes, so sir, I'd like some review.

You've read this piece before, but I've really worked hard over it, and so here it is. I don't need the chapter 1.2 reviewed, but if you want to, I don't mind!

Here's the link

SO kind of you(in advance)

~SHrubs

Hey Skins, it would be great if you could review this: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic76954.html

It would be great if you could focus on the style, the characters, and overall impact. Thanks a lot!

Hey Skins!

I was wondering if you would mind terribly reviewing this: topic76997.html

If you could that would just be fantastic! Feel free to tear it to shreds.
-Once

Hi Skins.

Would just like to say you're fantastic and the efforts you go to do keep up to date with your WRFF thread is astounding and an example of excellence to us all would-be reviewers

Keep up the awesome work.



- Jai

Would you ever be so kind as to review my new entry? It's a prologue, so it's not too long.
Here is a link....
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Thanks a lot!
Really appreciate it!
-Jojo

Could you perhaps review this? Thanks in advance.

Hey Skins,

So because your such an amazing reviewer, would you want to review my latest piece? It is a short story posted in general fiction. If you decide to take the order, feel free to rip it to shreds! Thanks!

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-HostofHorus

Heya Skins.

Would you care to review my first chapter to a maybe-going-somewhere-maybe-not thing?

Girl from Daphnis-- Ch.1

It's Romantic fiction. So far. I'm not sure it what genre it will end up if I ever finish this.

Thanks in advance,

Lavvi

Aaaaaaaaaaaand, I'm done.

Also, I'm going away for a few days, so I wont' be able to do any reviews. Because of that, I'd avoid asking me for any really. Once I'm back though, I shall open this again.

I'm back now, so request away.

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Could you review that please THANKS SKINSY!

Done! ^^