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Tue Feb 15, 2011 1:56 am
ScarletteRose says...

Skins, I've come to depend on your reviews...

I would like the works. Nitpick and overall :D

First chapter of an old novel.

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Thu Feb 24, 2011 12:51 pm
Sopster says...


This is general fiction. :) It's just a short intro to a novel I'm working on. I just want to know if it's too heavy/ too much description...that kinda' thing.

Thanks! :D
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Mon Feb 28, 2011 5:40 pm
EmmaJane says...

Skinsy! May I request a review from you? It's fantasy fiction. A small prologue... I would really appreciate your opinion on it.
Little Macey.
Thank you! (:
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Tue Mar 01, 2011 12:54 pm
MiaParamore says...

Yes, so sir, I'd like some review.

You've read this piece before, but I've really worked hard over it, and so here it is. I don't need the chapter 1.2 reviewed, but if you want to, I don't mind!

Here's the link

SO kind of you(in advance)

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Tue Mar 01, 2011 9:31 pm
Valentine says...

Hey Skins, it would be great if you could review this:

It would be great if you could focus on the style, the characters, and overall impact. Thanks a lot!
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Sun Mar 06, 2011 9:51 am
onceuponatim3xo says...

Hey Skins!

I was wondering if you would mind terribly reviewing this: topic76997.html

If you could that would just be fantastic! Feel free to tear it to shreds.
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Sun Mar 06, 2011 11:46 am
seeminglymeaningless says...

Hi Skins.

Would just like to say you're fantastic and the efforts you go to do keep up to date with your WRFF thread is astounding and an example of excellence to us all would-be reviewers :)

Keep up the awesome work.

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Tue Mar 08, 2011 11:27 pm
XxMattxX says...

Would you ever be so kind as to review my new entry? It's a prologue, so it's not too long.
Here is a link....
Thanks a lot!
Really appreciate it!
Solvalery/GeeLyria Fans

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Thu Mar 10, 2011 3:53 pm
Kafkaescence says...

Could you perhaps review this? Thanks in advance. :D


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Fri Mar 18, 2011 4:33 am
HostofHorus says...

Hey Skins,

So because your such an amazing reviewer, would you want to review my latest piece? It is a short story posted in general fiction. If you decide to take the order, feel free to rip it to shreds! Thanks!


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Mon Mar 21, 2011 7:44 am
Lavvie says...

Heya Skins.

Would you care to review my first chapter to a maybe-going-somewhere-maybe-not thing?

Girl from Daphnis-- Ch.1

It's Romantic fiction. So far. I'm not sure it what genre it will end up if I ever finish this.

Thanks in advance,

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Wed Mar 23, 2011 11:59 pm
Skins says...

Aaaaaaaaaaaand, I'm done.

Also, I'm going away for a few days, so I wont' be able to do any reviews. Because of that, I'd avoid asking me for any really. Once I'm back though, I shall open this again. :)

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Sun Mar 27, 2011 3:35 pm
Skins says...

I'm back now, so request away. :P

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Sun Mar 27, 2011 3:36 pm
Jas says...


Could you review that please :) THANKS SKINSY!
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Sun Mar 27, 2011 4:30 pm
Skins says...

Done! ^^

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