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Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?



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Sat Sep 22, 2012 1:35 am
confetti says...



hey
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Thu Jun 06, 2013 2:20 pm
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Sins says...



Guess who's back, back again.
Skinsy's back, tell a friend


Okay no but seriously, I'm the freest I've been in basically centuries right now until around September time, so this is my return to YWS. My main priority with my return is reviewing because it's actually slightly disturbing how much I've missed doing it. As both a result of my current free time and my desire to review...

This thread is now open for reviews


If you'd like a review, just post your link as a reply to this thread and I'll get on it ASAP. As a warning though, please don't expect anything that... impressive. I haven't reviewed a single thing since probably this time last year, maybe even longer, so I will undoubtedly be rather rusty.

But yes, request away, my pretties!
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Tue Jun 11, 2013 2:35 am
Shindig says...



Hi, my name is.. what? My name is.. who? My name is wikiwiki addicted2theshindigg

Ok so, here's a story. Somewhat fictional - based on real events.

Read & review as many chapters as you feel like. There's only 3 so far. Or you can cumulatively review them all at the end. Whatever you want.

Enjoy, thanks!
  





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Tue Jun 11, 2013 7:31 pm
Sins says...



All done! Anyone else?
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Thu Jun 13, 2013 6:02 am
Wariofart says...



Harnesse - Episode 1 "Warning Signals"

It's a script [gasp], so whatever you can do with it is greatly appreciated. If you could talk about how you felt about the characters, that'd be extra-super amazing. Thanks!
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Mon Jun 17, 2013 8:20 pm
Sins says...



Done! Next?
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Fri Jun 21, 2013 1:19 am
Wherethewindgoes says...



Would it be possible for you to review this?

Thanks in advance!
But if the silence takes you, then I hope it takes me too.

A review?
  





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Thu Jun 27, 2013 7:59 pm
Sins says...



Voila, finished! Anyone else?
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Tue Jul 09, 2013 9:37 pm
Sins says...



I am bloodthirsty.

Please feed me.
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Sat Jul 20, 2013 5:17 pm
Twit says...



Le one et le two for your thoughtful consideration.
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Sun Jul 21, 2013 6:15 am
darkangel_05 says...



If you have the time and energy, Skins. :D

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Never B flat,
Always B natural.

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Wed Jul 24, 2013 9:38 pm
Sins says...



Done, done, and done! Anyone else?
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Sun Oct 06, 2013 8:48 am
Kobita says...



can you review this for me?

In Dream Sequence

thanks.
  





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Wed Nov 27, 2013 8:50 pm
Cirute says...



Could you please review my story.http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=106164Sorry that I have to give you the URL, I'm new here and don't really know how to properly post stuff in the forums.
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