Hi! Can you please, please, please review my story 'Just Another Day'? Just a general review, really. My grammar isn't that great, but that's something I *know* I have to work on. - Alexandra
Can you review this for me? It's a contest entry (not yours, though ), so I need some serious critiquing so that it's up to scratch. Thanks in advance.
"A superman ... is, on account of certain superior qualities inherent in him, exempted from the ordinary laws which govern men. He is not liable for anything he may do." Nathan Leopold
Rawr! Hey Skins! Can you please re-review ( I think? ) ch. 3 of The Bourreau and the Waltz Dancer? post800147.html Thanks! ... Oh! And chapter 1? post799799.html You don't have to for chapter 1 =3= Just if you feel like it.
14 years have passed And yet I'm unabled To find a friend For my existence is lower Than a piece of grass.
Been working on it for a while it is the intro and first part of the first chapter (the whole of the first chapter will be like over 20 pages long so I'm just putting here the first part ) It is called Fear and it's General fiction and for now it's rated 12 + for language, though the following chapters will be from 12+ to 16+ to 18+ .
hey there, it's Psudiname, and I would like some of my stuff reviewed. if you could review the first three chapters of my unfinished novel i would be happy. I would especially like focus on plot, charecter development and style, and less focus on grammer and spelling. the links are included below: topic73681.html topic73742.html topic73817.html
if anyone wants a review, post on my profile and I'll get to it in a couple days.
Hi Skins, I know poetry isn't your thing, but I've been impressed with your poetry reviews anyways Would you be willing to look at one of my poems? topic74123.html Thanks!
May you never steal, lie, or cheat. But if you must steal, then steal away my sorrows. And if you must lie, then lie with me all the nights of your life. And if you must cheat, then please, cheat death. — An Unknown Bride, Leap Year
Gender:
Points: 1094
Reviews: 10