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Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?



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Fri Dec 24, 2010 9:10 am
occasionalpessimist says...



Hi! Can you please, please, please review my story 'Just Another Day'?
Just a general review, really. My grammar isn't that great, but that's something I *know* I have to work on.
- Alexandra :D

Link: topic73429.html#p797642
I'm not insane. You're just jealous because the voices only talk to me.

Read my story, Elements: The Trilogy! page.php?id=900
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Fri Dec 24, 2010 3:58 pm
Tigersprite says...



Hey Skeensy. Yup, I'm back again. :P

Can you review this for me? It's a contest entry (not yours, though ;)), so I need some serious critiquing so that it's up to scratch. Thanks in advance. :D
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Fri Dec 24, 2010 10:54 pm
Roal says...



Rawr! Hey Skins! Can you please re-review ( I think? ) ch. 3 of The Bourreau and the Waltz Dancer?
post800147.html
Thanks!
...
Oh!
And chapter 1? post799799.html
You don't have to for chapter 1 =3= Just if you feel like it.
14 years have passed
And yet I'm unabled
To find a friend
For my existence is lower
Than a piece of grass.
  





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Sat Dec 25, 2010 5:16 pm
Sins says...



Done! :P
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.
  





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Sun Dec 26, 2010 3:00 am
LindseyBrooke says...



Hey Skins! Review my prologue for me? topic73696.html
Thank you! (:

-Lindsey
"Next year I'll be transferred to Pigfarts."
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Sun Dec 26, 2010 10:28 am
Lord Anzius says...



Hullo :D
Would you review this piece for me? :)

Been working on it for a while it is the intro and first part of the first chapter (the whole of the first chapter will be like over 20 pages long so I'm just putting here the first part :P )
It is called Fear and it's General fiction and for now it's rated 12 + for language, though the following chapters will be from 12+ to 16+ to 18+ .

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic69539.html#p763503
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Mon Dec 27, 2010 2:40 pm
Sins says...



Viola! All done!
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.
  





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Tue Dec 28, 2010 1:31 am
psudiname says...



hey there, it's Psudiname, and I would like some of my stuff reviewed. if you could review the first three chapters of my unfinished novel i would be happy. I would especially like focus on plot, charecter development and style, and less focus on grammer and spelling. the links are included below:
topic73681.html
topic73742.html
topic73817.html
if anyone wants a review, post on my profile and I'll get to it in a couple days.
  





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Sat Jan 01, 2011 9:00 pm
Button says...



Hey, if you have some free time, could you please take a look at this?

viewtopic.php?t=74039


Thanks so much, Skins! :D

-Coral-
  





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Mon Jan 03, 2011 12:14 pm
Sins says...



Done, at last!
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.
  





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Mon Jan 03, 2011 6:49 pm
Nightshade says...



Hi Skins, I know poetry isn't your thing, but I've been impressed with your poetry reviews anyways :) Would you be willing to look at one of my poems?
topic74123.html
Thanks!
  





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Tue Jan 04, 2011 2:14 am
Flower~Child says...



Hey Skinsy my darling. Would you mind reviewing my prologue?

topic74219.html
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.

  





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Wed Jan 05, 2011 3:46 pm
Button says...



Hi there Skins, I'm back. For probably the umpteenth time. :)

I was wondering if you have some time, could you please take a look at this?
topic74145.html

I'd really appreciate. If you can't though, or just don't feel like it, I totally understand.
Either way, thanks! :)

-Coral-
  





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Mon Jan 10, 2011 7:00 pm
Sins says...



Okay, I'm finally free!

Shoot. 8)
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.
  





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Tue Jan 11, 2011 1:46 am
Flower~Child says...



Hello my darling. Will you review my poem? topic74591.html
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.

  








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