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Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?



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Mon Oct 06, 2014 2:40 pm
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Sins says...



I HAVE RETURNED (I think. I mean, let's face it, this is me. I'll probably disappear for a year again within the next week, but hey, I'll give it a shot.)

But yeah, I'm open to review requests again, so run at me with your literary masterpieces!
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Sat Nov 08, 2014 2:47 am
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Testiculosis, Parts One Through Five

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Tue Jan 19, 2016 2:00 pm
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I've escaped my hiatus and am now accepting reviews again!

Who knows how long this will be for, so y'all may as well take advantage of it while it lasts :P
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Tue Jan 19, 2016 4:04 pm
Lightsong says...



I will take advantage. Please review Ruby of Revenge [Part 1]! Thanks! :)
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Tue Jan 19, 2016 11:59 pm
Sins says...



All done! Anyone else need anything reviewed?
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Sat Jan 30, 2016 4:50 pm
Lightsong says...



Hey! I need one last review for Bad Lights, Good Lights [Chapter 1.0, Edited 1]. :D If you think the reviews are enough though, you can go to the second subchapter if you want! :D
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Sun Jan 31, 2016 2:34 pm
Sins says...



Aaaaaaaall done!

Keep 'em coming, snazpots.
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Mon Feb 01, 2016 7:51 pm
Costa says...



I'd really appreciate some input on this initial draft of a story I've been cooking for a good long while:

War of Dawn - Prologue and Chapter 1

Don't hold back since this IS a legit "babby's first"!

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Mon Feb 01, 2016 9:41 pm
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All done, anyone else? :)
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Wed Feb 03, 2016 1:14 am
Rascalover says...



Me please!
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Mon Feb 08, 2016 5:02 pm
Lightsong says...



Me too! Please review Bad Lights, Good Lights [Chapter 1.1, Edited 1]! :P
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The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

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Sun Feb 21, 2016 8:10 pm
Sins says...



Forgot to update this, oops.

All done with the previous requests, so please run at me with more demands!
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Sun Feb 21, 2016 8:50 pm
CodyKnight says...



Knight's Gauntlet

I would really appreciate some feedback if you still have the time, I'm editing my second chapter now before I begin on the third.

Thanks in advance if you get to it :)
  





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Tue Feb 23, 2016 1:18 am
CodyKnight says...



Thank you!
  








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