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Mon Apr 05, 2010 4:56 pm
MiaParamore says...



AT YOUR SERVICE!!!!!


So after a long hiatus, I am opeingin ym reviewing thread once again and would be glad to help you out. Well, I have five stars 8) and my reviews are pretty lengthy so you can trust me with your work.

All I need is a link to your piece. I don't mind any genre and also I will review 16+ work, as I have come to know that this rating has nothing obscene and it can be read by me.

Poetry?I am not sure if you should take that risk with me as I am no good at poetry and also have never attempted writing something good here. But still I won't mind reviewing it, but you might mind my review after it's posted as it's gonna be useless. :lol:

It would be my honour to help you out! And this site asks for British English, so I would be judging you with that perspective until you tell me that you use US or Australian one.

Links to some of my detailed reviews:
Let Me Love You
bridge over Paradise
There are many. I would upload thme later.

Hoping to get lots of reviews. :)

~Shubhi
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Wed Apr 07, 2010 9:44 am
MiaParamore says...



No one wants a review? Please let me know. I am craving for doing a review.
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Thu Apr 08, 2010 1:48 pm
Rydia says...



Hey, I'd like to make a request on someone else's behalf please. Here's the link: topic61466.html

Thank you. If you'd like a review in return, feel free to send me a pm.

Heather xx
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Fri Apr 09, 2010 4:54 am
Firearris says...



Willing to do an essay, by any chance?

post685378.html#p685378
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard appears "We have weasels now!"
[Firearris] 10:45 pm: askes the guard for the weasel!
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard gives Firearris the Weasel.
[Firearris] 10:46 pm: aquires the weasel and renames it "Cat"

Take that, Lumi.





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Sat Apr 10, 2010 4:45 am
MiaParamore says...



Kitty yours done!
Firearris: Sorry I have done half but won't continue it further. It's adult I believe.
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Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
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Sat Apr 10, 2010 9:47 pm
Sins says...



Heya :)

Could you review this please, if you have the time?
It's pretty short.

Thanks!

xoxo Skins
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Sun Apr 11, 2010 2:26 pm
MiaParamore says...



Skins the review is done. :D Keep writing! You are doing a good job!
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Next time you point a finger
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Mon Apr 12, 2010 1:59 am
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topic61758.html?uid=14728


this, please?
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Mon Apr 12, 2010 5:33 am
Apple says...



Link; topic61809.html

Could you please review this peice of work, and be as tough as possible! :)
I spy!





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Mon Apr 12, 2010 4:01 pm
curiousvampire says...



Please review my vampire story It titled 'In the Company of a Vampire'. I would provide a link but I'm too lazy to that so just go to my portfolio.
"I became insane,with long intervals of horrible insanity."

"Their ideology is that human nature is fundamentally evil.In other words, humans are evil from the day they are born."

"Human is beatiful. Perfect is boring."





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Mon Apr 12, 2010 4:42 pm
MiaParamore says...



It will be done by Wednesday i guess.
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Next time you point a finger
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Tue Apr 13, 2010 6:03 pm
MiaParamore says...



Dreamy115 done! Heading towards rest of your works.
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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Wed Apr 14, 2010 10:21 am
MiaParamore says...



Curiousvampire done, will get to yours Apple tomorrow.
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Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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Wed Apr 14, 2010 6:46 pm
MiaParamore says...



Any more???
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Next time you point a finger
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Thu Apr 15, 2010 7:32 pm
Sins says...



Hey again :)

I'm not sure if you'll be willing to do this, but I may as well ask :wink:
Could you review my novella? It's literally only 20 something pages long, so it's pretty short.
If you don't want to do it, that's fine! I was just wondering.

The Beauty In Ugly

Thanks!

xoxo Skins
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