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Fri May 14, 2010 12:56 pm
MiaParamore says...



Hi Jasmine. you review is done! Have a good day ahead or night.

Anyone wanting a review from me?
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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Tue May 18, 2010 1:08 pm
MiaParamore says...



Let me reviews something for you now! I din good ones since past two days.
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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Wed May 19, 2010 3:14 am
Jas says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic63893.html

Hey, could you review this?
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~





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Wed May 19, 2010 1:26 pm
MiaParamore says...



Jasmine, your review is done! That was a brilliantly written poem. :D

Anyone else, starving for my reviews?

~Shubhi
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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Sun May 23, 2010 6:09 pm
Sins says...



Heya!

Would you mind reviewing my short story/monologue thing for me? It's pretty bad... that's why I need you to review it for me!

topic64107.html

Thanks in advance,

xoxo Skins
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.





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Mon May 24, 2010 9:40 am
MiaParamore says...



All done Skins. I had fun reading it. Just fix those things and it would be perfect. :D

Anyone else?
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore





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Fri Jul 16, 2010 2:14 pm
MiaParamore says...



I am taking in requests again and I would do anything reviewed 16+ too from now on. Please send in a lot of requests. And yes I have five stars and I am working hard to get Reviewer II badge. help me, I help you!

~Shubhi :smt003
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I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore





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Fri Jul 16, 2010 2:15 pm
Leilani says...



didn't u review mine already O.o i dont remember =___=
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Sat Jul 17, 2010 12:03 pm
Vanadis says...



Hey. Writing a request, as you requested. :)

EDIT: I took it down for editing, because I didn't want too much to keep up with. You get first dibs when I repost, if you like. Thanks again, and sorry! :/
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Tue Jul 20, 2010 9:31 pm
ziggiefred says...



Hey there
Could you please review my chapter posting.php?mode=edit&f=5&p=7385
I'm stuck, well you'll see why from the intoduction I posted. The post is a little old but I'm really desperate.
Thank you in advance :)

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Wed Jul 21, 2010 8:54 pm
Sins says...



Heya Shubhi!

Will you please review the next part of my novel? It's pretty short so it shouldn't take you too long.

topic67306.html

Thanks in advance!
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Thu Jul 22, 2010 1:51 pm
MiaParamore says...



The review is done, Skins. :)

Anybody else on the reviewing list? Huh? :wink:

~Shubhi
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I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore





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Thu Jul 22, 2010 8:45 pm
LibbyLovesDrums says...



topic67408.html
Last edited by LibbyLovesDrums on Sat Jul 24, 2010 8:21 am, edited 2 times in total.
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Sat Jul 24, 2010 12:09 am
blackbird12 says...



Hi there, would you mind reviewing this poem for me? Thanks in advance!

topic67365.html
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I would have risen from the ground.

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Sat Jul 24, 2010 7:30 am
MiaParamore says...



Ziggie, your is finally done. Well, I did it yesterday itself. And now I am going to do Blackbird's. :)

Edit: Blackbird's review is all done, and it was probably the worst review I have ever given. What to do? poetry is not my cup of tea.

Anyone else? I won't disappoint you like I did Black.
~Shubhi
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I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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