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Sun May 02, 2010 8:03 am
Lydia1995 says...



Hey Shubi, I have something you can review if you like - http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post696971.html#p696971

The other chapters are under the possibly related items tab if you want to read them but you don't have to. I'm mainly looking for a review on any grammer issues.

Thank You,
~Lydia
Thinking about what you COULD achieve will get you no where. You've got to chase your dreams.
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=188&t=92400 - Need a review?





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Sun May 02, 2010 5:05 pm
MiaParamore says...



hey Lydia,your reviews done!
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore





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Mon May 03, 2010 12:37 pm
MiaParamore says...



Guys, don't you like my sincerity. Please let me do some good deeds :D
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore





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Mon May 03, 2010 9:05 pm
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Jas says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post698261.html#p698261

Hey could you please review this? Thankies!
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~





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Wed May 05, 2010 1:48 pm
MiaParamore says...



Hey Jass, your is done! Do PM when you need more!

Also, guys I ain't that bad at reviewing so please give me a chance and let me be of some help.:D
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore





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Wed May 05, 2010 2:32 pm
Sins says...



Hey shubhi :)

Could you review the next chapter of my novel please?

Can You See Me?

Thanks, :P

xoxo Skins
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.





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Wed May 05, 2010 4:31 pm
MiaParamore says...



Done Skins. Just don't stop posting your work! :roll:

Anyone else? :D
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore





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Thu May 06, 2010 4:36 pm
MiaParamore says...



Guys giveme soemthing to review. Even younger people get stuff to review!
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore





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Sat May 08, 2010 5:29 pm
MiaParamore says...



Give me something to review at least.
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore





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Sun May 09, 2010 3:46 pm
MiaParamore says...



Give me something guys.

EDIT: A week has passed and I still don't have a thing on my hands.
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore





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Tue May 11, 2010 5:47 pm
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MiaParamore says...



Gimme more. All the pages are mostly filled up with me begging for reviews.
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore





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Wed May 12, 2010 1:45 pm
MiaParamore says...



Please, please, please, don't make me beg.
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore





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Wed May 12, 2010 8:12 pm
sarebear says...



Hi,

I was wondering if you were interested. Here is the link to my poem: viewtopic.php?t=63413

It's called Hate. and I could really use a review! I was hoping you wouldn't mind. I rated it 12+, not sure why. it's in dramatic poetry. Thanks for your help!

Sarebear
Give a man a fish, he'll eat for a day. Teach a man to fish, he'll eat for a lifetime. Talk to a hungry man about fish, and you're a psychologist.





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Thu May 13, 2010 1:12 pm
MiaParamore says...



Done...my first good review for poetry! Though its not that good.

Anyone else? I won't disappoint you people.
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore





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Fri May 14, 2010 12:32 am
Jas says...



ThinPrettyStrong-Lost


Could review my poem?
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~








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