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Mon Jul 19, 2010 2:54 am
katchaerin says...

Hey lava!
Glad I found you. XD
Could you review my novel? Thanks so much.



THANKS! Those are chapters 1, 2 and 3.

-KAT <3
'cause I review back. XD XD XD

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Tue Jul 20, 2010 5:09 am
Prosithion says...

Hey, I was wondering if you could critique a scene from my novella 'In Defense of Our Nation'.

I would suggest scene 1, but I'll leave that up to you.


It's speculative science fiction.

"wub wub wub wub. Now Zoidberg is the popular one."

"Computer... Captain's musk"

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Sun Jul 25, 2010 2:13 pm
Sionarama says...

Hi Im a beginner artist!!!
Please review my Manga piece.
I don't know how to put up the link so that you will just have to go through my profile... sorry! :(
Thanks sooooo much!!!
"You may not be educated well in the areas of etiquette and the like as a princess, but you do throw some bashing good parties!"
Not all princesses are pink sparkles.
Exhibit A

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Wed Jul 28, 2010 1:55 pm
Lava says...

Pretending in words was too tentative, too vulnerable, too embarrassing to let anyone know.
- Ian McEwan in Atonement

kimi: influencing others since GOD KNOWS WHEN.


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Wed Jul 28, 2010 2:06 pm
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Shearwater says...

Hey Lava! It's Pink, just wondering if you had some time to review this story of mine?
Thanks a bunch!


(Don't worry, it's chapter one) :)
There are three rules for writing a novel. Unfortunately, no one knows what they are.
-W. Somerset Maugham

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Wed Aug 04, 2010 3:18 pm
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Jas says...


I was wondering if you would review this. It's the first chapter of this story I'm trying out. :D Thanks


I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.


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Thu Aug 05, 2010 10:26 am
Razzker says...

Hi, Lava!

Could you review my short story? It's in the Fantasy genre. Thanks in advance!

Blue Flames and Bloodshot Eyes
Check out my blog: Razztazztic!

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Fri Aug 06, 2010 1:57 pm
blackbird12 says...

Could you review this short story for me? Thanks!

If I had wings, I would have opened them.
I would have risen from the ground.

-Mary Oliver

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Mon Aug 09, 2010 5:29 am
addicted2theshindigg says...

Hey Lava! I dont know who you are, but I'm glad I found you!

Do you mind reading/reviewing my short story, "Poppet"? It's fictional, and originally intended to be a tragedy. The link is below:


Thanks alot!

p.s. The land of dosas and paneer? I would love to go there! =P

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Tue Aug 10, 2010 1:14 pm
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Hecate says...

Hey, could you review this for me? I just edited it...again. Thank you!!

It's fantasy fiction by the way :)


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Thu Sep 30, 2010 12:37 pm
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Jenthura says...

Hey Lava, I know you aren't accepting and all, and I'm sorry to inconvenience you, was my prize from the contest, remember?


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Mon Nov 22, 2010 4:12 am
funkyreg101 says...

Hi! My name is regan, could you review either of the peices of my novel Racing to Death? Thanks a bundle!

One day your prince will come... Mine? He took a wrong left turn, got lost, and is too stubburn to ask for directions.

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Wed Nov 24, 2010 7:38 pm
Sins says...

Hey, Lava! :)

When you have the time, could you review the first chapter of my novel? There is a prologue before it, but I think you should be okay without reading that.


Please and thank you!
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.

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Wed Dec 01, 2010 4:22 am
Boolovesyou says...

Hey can you review this for me please? =D topic72663.html#p791565
Milestiba uzvar visu, Milestiba ir upuris.

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Tue Dec 07, 2010 3:15 pm
Lava says...

Back OPEN for business. Please note that I accept only three reviews at a time.

So, yes, go ahead and drop your requests through the crater. ^^
Pretending in words was too tentative, too vulnerable, too embarrassing to let anyone know.
- Ian McEwan in Atonement

kimi: influencing others since GOD KNOWS WHEN.


Fairy Tales are more than true; not because they tell us that dragons exist, but because they tell us that dragons can be beaten.
— G.K. Chesterton