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Mon May 31, 2010 1:02 am
Lava says...



Rascal, yours is done.
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Pretending in words was too tentative, too vulnerable, too embarrassing to let anyone know.
- Ian McEwan in Atonement

sachi: influencing others since GOD KNOWS WHEN.

  





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Fri Jun 04, 2010 3:22 am
EmiAnne says...



Hi! would you please review a story of mine? I'm trying to make it totally awesome, but I'm having troubles! Please???
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Courage doesn't always roar. Sometimes courage is the quiet voice at the end of the day saying, "I will try again tomorrow"
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Thu Jun 10, 2010 9:19 pm
GeeLyria says...



Will you review this?? :?
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Sat Jun 26, 2010 4:35 pm
Lava says...



Open for business again!
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Pretending in words was too tentative, too vulnerable, too embarrassing to let anyone know.
- Ian McEwan in Atonement

sachi: influencing others since GOD KNOWS WHEN.

  





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Sat Jun 26, 2010 5:14 pm
MiaParamore says...



Hey Lava. back for business, huh? First of all how were your exams?

I would love a review on the chapter-8 of my novel A Criminal's Heart. The link is in my signature and there you'll find the chapter.

The second part is not yet complete but I hope to finish it by tomorrow. So please review whatever is there.

~Shubhi :)
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I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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Mon Jun 28, 2010 3:33 pm
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Shubhi, all done! Exams were okay. Lets my results reflect what I did accurately.
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Pretending in words was too tentative, too vulnerable, too embarrassing to let anyone know.
- Ian McEwan in Atonement

sachi: influencing others since GOD KNOWS WHEN.

  





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Mon Jun 28, 2010 4:02 pm
ShelraofWaral says...



Hye Lava!
Its my first attempt to write a fiction story.
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic66058.html
Would you please review it? I would like to know in what aspects of writing I need to improve on.
Thanks. :)
"The main thing is to keep the main thing the main thing. ~~
Steven Covey "

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Sat Jul 03, 2010 2:29 pm
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DONE! Anyone want a review?
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Pretending in words was too tentative, too vulnerable, too embarrassing to let anyone know.
- Ian McEwan in Atonement

sachi: influencing others since GOD KNOWS WHEN.

  





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Sun Jul 04, 2010 6:10 am
MiaParamore says...



Link: Chilly Farm

Hey. Would you mind reviewing this? Thankies!
~Shubhi
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I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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Sun Jul 04, 2010 11:37 pm
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topic66413.html

Would you mind reviewing this? Whenever you have the time. Thanks a bunch!
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I would have risen from the ground.

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Tue Jul 06, 2010 7:14 pm
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Here is the second chapter of a novel I'm writing.

post734418.html#p734418

A note is that you DO NOT need to read the first chapter because every chapter it will switch between two characters. Thus this chapter is completely unrelated, as of now, to the first chapter. If you plan on reading future chapters than it will make much more sense if you read the first one.
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Thu Jul 15, 2010 4:50 pm
Leilani says...



Hi Lava will you please review my story ^-^ thank you so much
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=66775
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Thu Jul 15, 2010 7:34 pm
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I hope you dont mind- a quick comment is nice. Its very short.
Despite the lies that you're making
Your love is mine for the taking
My love is just waiting
To clothe you in crimson roses

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Sun Jul 18, 2010 6:40 am
Lava says...



Hey all!
Just a quick note. Please read : topic61097.html#p681799 before you request. Thank you. :)

~Lava
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Pretending in words was too tentative, too vulnerable, too embarrassing to let anyone know.
- Ian McEwan in Atonement

sachi: influencing others since GOD KNOWS WHEN.

  








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