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Tue Apr 27, 2010 3:45 pm
MiaParamore says...



Would you like to review my fashion designs? The link is: Designs!

Thanks in advance!
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore
  





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Tue Apr 27, 2010 4:26 pm
Lava says...



That's done. Anymore?
~
Pretending in words was too tentative, too vulnerable, too embarrassing to let anyone know.
- Ian McEwan in Atonement

sachi: influencing others since GOD KNOWS WHEN.

  





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Wed Apr 28, 2010 1:33 am
canislupis says...



Me!

Here's my general-fiction short story: post695936.html?hilit=the quarter#p695936

Thanks!

Lupis
  





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Fri Apr 30, 2010 5:20 pm
MiaParamore says...



Hey Lava. Would you review this?A Criminal's HEart~ Chapter-5
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore
  





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Mon May 10, 2010 9:46 am
Lava says...



Okay, bumps this up.

Anyone need anything?
~
Pretending in words was too tentative, too vulnerable, too embarrassing to let anyone know.
- Ian McEwan in Atonement

sachi: influencing others since GOD KNOWS WHEN.

  





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Mon May 10, 2010 1:56 pm
Hecate says...



Hey there Lava, could you review this?

viewtopic.php?t=63316

Thanks xxx
  





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Sat May 22, 2010 9:56 am
MiaParamore says...



Hi Lava, I would love a review on the seventh chapter of my novel. You'll find the link in my signature. Thanks in advance!

~Shubhi
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore
  





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Sat May 22, 2010 11:56 am
Lava says...



Shubhi, done. :)
~
Pretending in words was too tentative, too vulnerable, too embarrassing to let anyone know.
- Ian McEwan in Atonement

sachi: influencing others since GOD KNOWS WHEN.

  





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Tue May 25, 2010 2:24 am
Yuriiko says...



hey there, Lava!

Can you review my work?
It's a romantic short story.
here the link: topic64143.html

thanks in advance! :mrgreen:
"Life is a poem keep it in the present tense." -Sherrel Wigal
  





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Wed May 26, 2010 10:43 am
MiaParamore says...



Link: Love Has No Boundaries

Could you review this? :D
Thanks!

~Shubhi
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore
  





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Thu May 27, 2010 5:53 am
Lava says...



DONE!

Anyone else?
~
Pretending in words was too tentative, too vulnerable, too embarrassing to let anyone know.
- Ian McEwan in Atonement

sachi: influencing others since GOD KNOWS WHEN.

  





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Sat May 29, 2010 2:52 pm
Kaedee says...



ME! I would love a review on two drawings (portraits, basically) that are here. They're based off of real photos of real people.
Take your time. Thank you!

~KD
Perfect things in life aren't things.
Spoiler! :
*_______*
  





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Sat May 29, 2010 8:30 pm
Rydia says...



My sister would love a review on this:

topic64379.html

Thank you xx
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Sun May 30, 2010 4:26 am
Lava says...



KD's and Kitty's are done. Anyone else?
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Pretending in words was too tentative, too vulnerable, too embarrassing to let anyone know.
- Ian McEwan in Atonement

sachi: influencing others since GOD KNOWS WHEN.

  





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Sun May 30, 2010 4:40 am
Rascalover says...



Can you review apart of my romantic novel please and thank you ? :)
topic64447.html
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