-If at first you don't succeed, then skydiving definitely isn't for you! -"Careful with that light at the end of the tunnel, it might be another train coming."
Sorry to bother you again but will you review a chapter of my story for me? I think you've reviewed a few of the previous chapters, so hopefully, it will make some sense!
-If at first you don't succeed, then skydiving definitely isn't for you! -"Careful with that light at the end of the tunnel, it might be another train coming."
Hey there, Maddy, could you please review this for me? I asked a few people to do it, but most still didn't get around to doing it. It'll be greatly appreciated
Hey could you take a look at this:http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic63329.html Someone has already critiqued it, but I just want a few more people to read it. Thanks! x
Someone told me there's a girl out there, with love in her eyes and flowers, in her hair.
-If at first you don't succeed, then skydiving definitely isn't for you! -"Careful with that light at the end of the tunnel, it might be another train coming."
-If at first you don't succeed, then skydiving definitely isn't for you! -"Careful with that light at the end of the tunnel, it might be another train coming."
-If at first you don't succeed, then skydiving definitely isn't for you! -"Careful with that light at the end of the tunnel, it might be another train coming."
-If at first you don't succeed, then skydiving definitely isn't for you! -"Careful with that light at the end of the tunnel, it might be another train coming."
Hi Maddy. I am not sure if you would like to do it or not as you didn't do the last one. But anyways, theres a novel I'm working on which was supposed to be a short story but they shifted it. Link: Love Has No Boundaries
Thanks for it in advance! ~Shubhi
"Next time you point a finger I might have to bend it back Or break it, break it off Next time you point a finger I'll point you to the mirror"
-If at first you don't succeed, then skydiving definitely isn't for you! -"Careful with that light at the end of the tunnel, it might be another train coming."
-If at first you don't succeed, then skydiving definitely isn't for you! -"Careful with that light at the end of the tunnel, it might be another train coming."
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