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Sun Apr 11, 2010 8:02 pm
eldEr says...



Okay, everybody's is done! Anybody else want anything reviewed?
Guuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurl.

got trans?





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Sun Apr 11, 2010 8:24 pm
emmylou1995 says...



Could you review my prologue and first chapter for my book?
Its called Diamond Fire.

Links-
Prologue: topic60846.html

First chapter: topic61776.html
When all you have is nothing, there is alot to go around.





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Mon Apr 12, 2010 7:57 pm
eldEr says...



Alright, those ones are done!
Anybody else?
Guuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurl.

got trans?





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Tue Apr 13, 2010 2:12 am
eldEr says...



I am in the mood for some fantasy-fiction! Anybody got any for me?
Guuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurl.

got trans?





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Wed Apr 14, 2010 2:23 am
eldEr says...



Anybody? Anybody at all? I'm getting bored of waiting for people to review my work and reply to the RPG's and such....I need something to occupy me!! :lol:
Guuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurl.

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Wed Apr 14, 2010 3:03 am
eldEr says...



Done. Anybody else?
Guuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurl.

got trans?





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Thu Apr 15, 2010 12:27 am
Winterblossoms says...



I would like you to review this~

viewtopic.php?t=61814

It's short. :) It's called Last, in general fiction. Need to finish up a few touches and then I'll post the second chapter. I just want to see what else I can improve, hopefully, most of the mistakes had already been cleared up. :D

Have a nice day.
Innuendo, oh my~ ♥





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Thu Apr 15, 2010 2:45 am
eldEr says...



Done! Anybody else? (I really loved that last one!)
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Thu Apr 15, 2010 4:58 pm
MiaParamore says...



WOULD YOU REVIEW THIS?
Chapter 4

Thanks in advance!
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore





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Sat Apr 17, 2010 3:56 pm
eldEr says...



Alright! Done that one. Anybody else got anything for me?
Guuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurl.

got trans?





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Sat Apr 17, 2010 3:57 pm
Jas says...



viewtopic.php?t=57852

It's a poem thingy :) Thankies!
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~





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Sun Apr 18, 2010 2:02 pm
eldEr says...



Done :)
Does anybody else have anything that needs reviewing?
Guuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurl.

got trans?





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Tue Apr 20, 2010 4:00 pm
eldEr says...



anybody at all???????????
Guuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurl.

got trans?





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Thu Apr 22, 2010 1:08 am
Jas says...



Hey Ishy!

I would love a review please! :)

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post693172.html#p693172

It's a love story that was supposed to be for Elinor Brynn's winter love contest but I was err...a little late :). If you could review it, I will send you a cookie! Thankies!
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~








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