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Tue Mar 23, 2010 11:55 pm
eldEr says...



Hey guys!
If you need somebody to review your work, I'll definately do it! It would be nice if you could sign my guestbook or donate points or something in return, but it isn't needed. :mrgreen:

I will review any rating, and pretty much any topic, EXCEPT for most fanfiction, however, there is one person's fanfiction that I really like, you know who you are...because it doesn't really need to be read with the real book. I'm best with poetry, but I don't mind reviewing stories. I'll review practically anything (except for as stated before, most fanfiction), but some reviews may be short.

I will not review work that already has more than 5 reviews because everything that needs to be said probably would have been said already. Please don't beg me to review your work, as it is tiresome. Beggers are the only ones who will be rejected other than people asking when they already have 5+ reviews.
*edit* I would appreciate it if you sent me a link to your stories... forgot to put this in at first! Thanks! *edit*

Please note that depending on how busy this gets, it could take me a while to get to you. Please be patient as I will try my hardest.

If I am overwhelmed in requests, then the title will be changed to: I shall review you! *Declining*
If *Declining* is in my title, then please do not post until it has been changed back to *Accepting*.
Thanks guys! Post away!
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Wed Mar 24, 2010 12:07 am
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ScarlettFire says...



Hello Isha. Would you review my fanfiction? Please?
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Sat Mar 27, 2010 2:33 am
Amnien says...



Would you be awesome and review the first and second chapters to my story?

It was originally going to be a short story but the plot is starting to unfold at a rapid pace and it might turn into a novel!

First Chapter: topic60718.html

Second Chapter: topic60794.html

Thanks!
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Sat Mar 27, 2010 9:38 am
MiaParamore says...



Hi. I have posted chapter-2 of my novel.' A Criminal's Heart'. You are already familiar with it.
Here's the link:
topic60808.html
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Mon Mar 29, 2010 6:41 pm
eldEr says...



All have been reviewed! I really hope they help!
Anybody else need any reviews?
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Tue Mar 30, 2010 4:42 am
Maddy says...



topic60873.html

A goosebumps-themed story for my little bro.

Thanks in advance! :)
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This awesome post bought to you by me. :)





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Tue Mar 30, 2010 6:18 am
StoryWeaver13 says...



If you or anyone else can review something of mine that'd be great, and I'll be sure to return the favor! :smt001
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Fri Apr 02, 2010 1:57 am
eldEr says...



Done. Anybody else need anything reviewed???
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Fri Apr 02, 2010 2:10 am
Apple says...



Oooo do mine, do mine!

Link; viewtopic.php?t=61127

hehehe Thank you!
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Fri Apr 02, 2010 2:25 am
eldEr says...



That one's done too! I like it.
Anybody else?
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Sat Apr 10, 2010 12:20 am
eldEr says...



Okay, so I'm back from my mini-vacation and I'm ready to do more reviews! Any takers?
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Sat Apr 10, 2010 6:01 am
RekatsRovert says...



Indeed! :) I'd sure appreciate it if you'd review my fantasy fiction, Crafting the Amulet. Thank you!

topic61533.html
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Sat Apr 10, 2010 5:25 pm
Shearwater says...



Hi, can you review this piece for me?
'How to Seduce Money'
topic61615.html
Thanks a bunch!

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Sat Apr 10, 2010 7:37 pm
callmeLily73 says...



Please review my story, A New Home, A New Love in the Romantic Fiction section. I have already written many parts but i would like it if you reviewed the last or second to last one that would be great! You don't have to read them all, just it might be confusing. I'll sign your guestbook! Thank you! -Lily <3 :D
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Sun Apr 11, 2010 4:16 am
eldEr says...



Rekats, yours is done! Sorry if I take a while to get around to you others, but I promise it will get done eventually! I've been sort of busy lately. Thanks so much for your patience!
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