Young Writers Society

If I think that your piece needs some work, I won't be afraid to let you know. I can be a little harsh, but what do I know anyway? Usually I can get back to you in 24 hours unless I'm really busy, in which case I'll be sure to inform you about the delay.

If you'd like me to review your story, please post a link.

I Specialize in Scripts
- Stage Scripts
- TV Scripts
- Film Scripts

I Also Like to Review
- Fantasy
- Science Fiction
- Other Fiction

I Will Review
- Historical Fiction
- Action/Adventure Fiction
- Romantic Fiction (No 18+ stories)

I Will Not Review
- Art
- Poetry
- Lyrics
- Novels

You want to review my prologue? It's not more than 200 words or so, and it's fantasy fiction. xD

Link: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic60030.html

Done

Well, I've submit more. Take a look? : )
Link: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic60214.html

Done

Let me know if I need to clarify anything.

Hey!

Erm, you said you don't review anything 18+, but I'm desperate for reviews on my historical fiction new chapter if you're interested, it's only got strong language. I don't mind if you pass!

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Thanks anyway,
Ben

Done

Currently Working On:

Nothing :'(

Hey there. Could you review my story 'Forbidden to love'. Warning: it's very long

thanx!

Oh my goodness that took a while

Done!

Currently Working On:

Nothing :'(

Can you review this for me: Seems like Eternity in Historical Fiction. it's recent so you will find it easily.

Could you review German Jew? Thank you.

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I'm finished Seems Like Eternity.


Currently working on:
German Jew - Eliza:)

I really need somebody to review at leaste chapter 2 for my novel.
Chapter 3 was finished shortly after, so I posted them in the same topic. The 3rd chapter is in the spoiler, but you don't have to review it if you're too busy.
It's Fantasy Fiction and I'm hoping somewhat good...
Thanks a million!

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Would you be awesome and review the first and second chapters to my story?

It was originally going to be a short story but the plot is starting to unfold at a rapid pace and it might turn into a novel!

First Chapter: topic60718.html

Second Chapter: topic60794.html

Thanks!

I want a reply for my story:

A Criminal's Heart-Prologue
A Criminal's Heart Chapter-1(OLIVIA)
Chapter-2

I already have many reviews for my prologue but would like to have for chapter 1 and 2.
Thanks