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Wed Jun 30, 2010 1:29 am
Mr.Knightley says...



Okay, everyone! New, shiny, better thread. Check out the first post for more information! :D
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Wed Jun 30, 2010 9:24 am
Yuriiko says...



hello, Mister!

Will you review this?
It's a poem. hee-hee.

topic66197.html

Thanks in advance! :D
"Life is a poem keep it in the present tense." -Sherrel Wigal





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Wed Jun 30, 2010 5:16 pm
Mr.Knightley says...



Finished, Yuriiko! Any more takers? I would really love some more... They're free! :D
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Fri Jul 02, 2010 12:28 pm
Mr.Knightley says...



Hrm. No requests. Do I seriously have to give you gifts?
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Fri Jul 02, 2010 12:37 pm
MiaParamore says...



Hey! Would you mind reviewing my Science Fiction short story? Here is the link: A Chilly Farm. Thanks in advance!

~Shubhi
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I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
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Sun Jul 04, 2010 7:26 pm
Mr.Knightley says...



Thanks, Shubhi! All set. Anybody else? I would love to have more than one request at a time, you know... : (
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Sun Jul 04, 2010 8:26 pm
xX_white_shadow_Xx says...



Awww, but what if it's a not-very-romantic romantic novel? :( *puppyeyes*

*sniff* Do I still get smexeh Timmy hugs even if you refuse to review?
Is he dancing with a little boy in spandex?!

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Sun Jul 04, 2010 8:27 pm
xX_white_shadow_Xx says...



Well, here it is anyway! =P And don't tell me how short it is, I knoooowww >.<

novel.php?id=340
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Sun Jul 04, 2010 10:08 pm
Mr.Knightley says...



Nutty! *tackleglompgigglesnorts* Thanks for the requests. :) I reviewed the first chapter and I'm going to do the other parts later. Must eat.

Anyone else? I would love to help!
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Sun Jul 04, 2010 11:08 pm
xX_white_shadow_Xx says...



member11563.html

Waaaanna review all my poetry, too? xD

ps: yay for huggles! =^_^=

pps: I like how your smexeh hugs include gigglesnorting xD
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Mon Jul 05, 2010 12:17 am
screamandshout says...



topic66428.html
dramatic poetry. Please and thank you.





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Thu Jul 08, 2010 12:26 pm
Mr.Knightley says...



I'll be sure to do the rest of these when I get back on Sunday, guys! Don't worry. :D
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Fri Jul 09, 2010 9:17 pm
WritingWords says...



Hi, Mr.Knightley! Can you please review the link in my signature? I will greatly appreciate it. Thanks!
Please follow me on all my writing quests by clicking "Follow" on my Profile. Thanks!

Popularity Wars Chapter Three is now here:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post735878.html#p735878

Please review!! Love ya!





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Sat Jul 10, 2010 7:59 pm
AquaMarine says...



Well, I'm going to add to your pile. A poem, please! topic66755.html
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Mon Jul 19, 2010 4:04 pm
Mr.Knightley says...



Finished! Except for yours, Amy. But you already know that. :L Any other takers?
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