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Tue Feb 08, 2011 4:43 pm
Button says...



Well, hello there, NathanFillionbuddy.

I was wondering if you could please take a look at this: it's the start of a novel that I've decided to continue. :)
topic75972.html

Thanks so much! ^_^





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Wed Feb 09, 2011 12:30 am
cannoncomplex says...



hi there ranger, can you review this for me?
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic75659.html

And when reviewing, can you focus on the plot, the style and the characters rather than the grammar? It is because I want to know which part of story making is my strength and weakness like a literal critic. So that when I make a new story, I know what to improve.
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Wed Feb 09, 2011 4:39 am
Ranger Hawk says...



Both are done! Thanks for requesting! :D
There are two kinds of folks who sit around thinking about how to kill people:
psychopaths and mystery writers.

I'm the kind that pays better.
~Rick Castle





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Thu Feb 10, 2011 10:34 pm
Sins says...



Hey, Ranger. ^^

This is a big ask, but would you mind reviewing a random part of my novel? If you need me to, I can give you a brief synopsis of what's happened so far.

topic76131.html

If you don't want to do it, that's totally fine. I would totally understand. xD Please and thank you!
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.





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Fri Feb 11, 2011 3:23 pm
Wolferion says...



Cheers Ranger!

I'd like to ask for your review on a Sci-Fi story =) It's just the beginning of a story I'm currently working on. It's not any really long, so hopefully it won't take much effort (I speak about effort, because english is not my first language and some people tend to get confused or annoyed by some of the sentences).

Here's the link http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post821082.html#p821082

Thanks!
Kyou~
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Sat Feb 12, 2011 6:27 pm
Speele says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=76114

Hey would you mind reviewing chapter one of my novel? Its sort of a sci-fi, fantasy, paranormal mix. I wasn't even really sure where to put it. It's long, but I'm hoping that it's entertaining enough to seem short. Its maybe ten pages. I have chapter two ready also, but as I have only one small review for chapter one, I didn't want to flood the system :) Please and thanks!?
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Sat Feb 12, 2011 6:47 pm
Kagi says...



I know you don't ususally review poetry and I know how awful it is to review stuff you don't like reviewing so you don't have to do this if you don't want to, I'm an easy going lassie.

Here;
A boy who wants to be loved

Thanks.
No pressure
Kaka xo
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Sat Feb 12, 2011 8:01 pm
Ranger Hawk says...



Kaka - of course I'll review yours! Deifnitely won't be the best review, but I'll still read it. :)

I'm still working on getting to Skins' review, so bear with me please. :D
There are two kinds of folks who sit around thinking about how to kill people:
psychopaths and mystery writers.

I'm the kind that pays better.
~Rick Castle





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Sat Feb 12, 2011 8:28 pm
Button says...



Hey there, Skellington-Castle-Buddy! :)

I was wondering if you could please take a look at the continuance of that chapter you reviewed a couple days ago. :)

topic76249.html

Thanks so much! :D





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Tue Feb 15, 2011 2:30 am
rolf18 says...



Could you please review the prologue to a novel I'll be posting shortly? I'll review something of yours.

post819954.html#p819954





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Thu Feb 17, 2011 11:54 pm
megsug says...



Hello,
I'm here to ask for a review.
post822490.html#p822490
I'm afraid it's romantic fiction, but you said you could stand it, so here you go. Enjoy and please tear it to shreds.
Test





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Sat Feb 19, 2011 10:58 am
Jennya says...



I've seen your reviews they are very good! :D
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