Young Writers Society

Want a review? I'd be happy to review anything! I especially like short works-- that way my reviews can be more detailed. But I'll do anything, if you ask! Also, specify if you want harsh review , so I don't hurt the feelings of anyone who wants a gentle one . Also, please note that if your work is so incredibly poorly-written that I cannot give a worthwhile review of it, then I will tell you.

EDIT:Yay! 250 reviews and the badge! Thanks for all the requests, guys!


Cheers!

--Dreamy115

Could you check out the first chapter of my fantasy novel. It's called the Assassins' Redemption-Redrafted. You'll probably want to skip down to my third post. That's the edited version. Here's a link:
topic58817.html

If you can find time to do it i'd be really grateful.

Thanks

Done!

post661825.html#p661825
thanks

Done! Sorry if it isn't long... the person before me took all my nitpicks.

I posted another part of chapter one of my fantasy novel, The Assassin's Redemption. I know I just asked you a few days ago, but I am in desperate need of critique. If you can find time to do it, that'll be great. The word count's 927. Here's a link:

topic59120.html

Thanks.

Done!

I want a harsh review!

Title: Mullings of a Failed Musician
Link: viewtopic.php?t=59420

Let me know if you want any particular review or points in return

Done!

Can you review "In cold blood" in narrative poetry. I would like to see what you think and I would see if I am getting better at poetry. Have a great day Fiction.

okay dreamy, give me the best as you can as in make it harsh! can you review it in terms of characters, plot and description and flow if you want...

Thanks

here is the link
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic59384.html

Hi Dreamy,
I would like you to read my story,' Finding me back' in Hisorical fiction. I have posted both the prologu and chapter-1.I want for both.
Prologue: topic59289.html
Chaper-1: topic59610.html
I think you do all the reviews you are requested for.
Thanks

Can you review "In cold blood" in narrative poetry. I would like to see what you think and I would see if I am getting better at poetry. Have a great day Fiction.

can you give me a link?

foxfire wrote:okay dreamy, give me the best as you can as in make it harsh! can you review it in terms of characters, plot and description and flow if you want...

Thanks

here is the link
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic59384.html

hey, fox.... i tried to review this, but it was just too confusing! Look at the review I gave there for what to do, then post here or pm me again, ok?

shubhiloves2write wrote:Hi Dreamy,
I would like you to read my story,' Finding me back' in Hisorical fiction. I have posted both the prologu and chapter-1.I want for both.
Prologue: topic59289.html
Chaper-1: topic59610.html
I think you do all the reviews you are requested for.
Thanks

Hey, I only do one review at a time (maybe I should have specified that) but I'll be happy to review you prologue. Post here again in a day or two with chapter one, okay?