Young Writers Society

What's happening peeps! This is where you give me the link to your writing, and riddle it chalk full of criticism until you never write again. Yeah, just kidding. Here's the deal, just post your link, and I'll do my best to help you guys out with some of my writing knowledge. Aight, that's about it. I would like, you know, specify what I like to review and stuff, but it doesn't really matter. This is about giving some helpful feedback.

Let's Roll

I could really use a review on the fantasy novel I'm writing.
Title: The Assassin's Redemption
Genre: Fantasy
Length: 4 pages
Link: post657279.html#p657279

ha! awesome( bring it on)...review my work please...i do need a good review right now

Title: the nature of Man: Envy
Genre: Fantasy or horror...can't specify really
lenght: 2-3 pages
link: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic58478.html

I really need reviws
title:heart of a vampire
genre:fanstay fiction
link:there is no link just fantsy fiction

All done. Please, I'm bloodthirsty for reviews.

Hi can yu review my story?
Title: Finding me back
Genre: Historical Fiction
Length:Moderate
Link:Finding me back- prologue

Finding me back-Chapter 1

complete

Hi, Valentine! Would you please review this for me? Pretty please? I don't mind harshness. It's about a boy in Nazi Germany writing to a local newspaper about his views on the country's advances, and how some of the themes displayed in Romeo and Juliet still live to this (1939) year and its events.

Title: An Editorial Letter
Genre: Historical/Other Fiction
Length: 2.5 pages
Link: topic59730.html

Thank you in advance!

Reviews are fun. xD

Title: The Robyn Academy
Genre: Fantasy
Length: 200 words or so (prologue)
Link: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic60030.html

Could you please review my story?

Title: The Inspection
Genre: Science Fiction
Length: 1200 words
Link: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic60055.html

Thanks

All done. From now on,no essays or non fiction writing people!

Title: Can You See Me?
Genre: Fantasy Fiction (Don't worry, no vampires)
Length: About a page and a bit (Sorry for not being specific)
Link: topic60526.html

I hope you can do this, thanks.

xoxo Skins

complete.

Title- Prologue: Diamond Fire(Revived)
Genre- Fantsy Fiction (Third Page)
Length- Not very long, maybe two pages?
Link- topic60846.html

Thank you so, so much! I am posting first chapter soon!

Title-Her dawn
Genre:Fantasy Fiction
Length: Less than a page
Link:http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=62998

I know you can't post a review on that one so can you post the review on Her Dawn(Temporary)? I know it is a lot to ask but I would a thorough review thank you.