Young Writers Society

Hey~
If you are looking for a story to review, I have one. I need a good critique on it, and I saw some of your reviews so I thought to ask. Though it is fairly long and incredibly odd, so if you don't wish to review it, it is no problem.

Here it is:
Tick Tock

~Incognito

I'll review yours later, Incognito, because I have to go out in about 15 minutes. But I will get back and review it, as soon as I can.

All done, Inc. A really great story. Odd, but great.

Anymore?

No one? I'm sad again.

Chirantha! I know I'm really annoying but I saw an empty space and thought I may as well ask for another review?

It's another poem (in dramatic poetry)

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic56319.html

Tis called Find me, and I would like to know what your opinion is?

Thank you!

Done, Onyx.

Anyone else?

No one again?

Hello. Do you think you could review an exerpt from my novel, Making Rain: Molly and Adam. It's romantic fiction. No rush. Take your time:)

~molly

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Could you please review this? TheNewHero

Will you review my novel? It's the Assassin's Redemption. Here's a link:
topic58466.html

Thanks.

Would you like have a look at this one: How difficult life could be

It is an adventure story!