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Mon Dec 21, 2009 4:27 pm
Chirantha says...



HI there. Anyone want their work reviewed? If so, you have come to right place.

Can review

Action/Adventure, Fanfic, Fantasy, Historical, Romantic, Sci-fic stories
Poetry - Any kind, but I'm not that much of a poetry person, okay?

But keep in mind that any of these are too serious, as in no one but the author can understand it, I won't be able to review them.

Try to review

Art/Photography - I know about art and I love it, but I'm not a good review of that. But if brings me up to it, I'll try.

Other fiction

Cannot review

Lyrics
Scripts
Non-fiction

Conditions

Please don't overwhelm me with reviews okay? I'll try to review what is given to me, within two days.

Cookie per review? Nah..just kiddin. :D

Thanks.
Last edited by Chirantha on Thu Dec 24, 2009 8:09 am, edited 2 times in total.
Warden: "If you want to lead, all you have to do is ask."
Alistair: "What? Lead? Me? No, no, no. No leading. Bad things happen when I lead. We get lost, people die, and the next thing you know I'm stranded somewhere without any pants."
- Dragon Age

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Tue Dec 22, 2009 3:18 am
Maddy says...



Hey C,

I would love if you could review a snippet of my story, Sparrowhawk Soar (the name is a work-in-progress). It is a Fantasy novel, and to help the readers understand it better I've added a little blurb and a story-so-far to help.
Don't worry about being harsh; I'm young, impressionable and need the critic.
Thanks so much,
-Madz.
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This awesome post bought to you by me. :)





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Tue Dec 22, 2009 5:13 am
Chirantha says...



Done. I hope I did a good job.

Anyone else? Please give me something to review.

Another thing, please post the link to the story okay?
Warden: "If you want to lead, all you have to do is ask."
Alistair: "What? Lead? Me? No, no, no. No leading. Bad things happen when I lead. We get lost, people die, and the next thing you know I'm stranded somewhere without any pants."
- Dragon Age

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Tue Dec 22, 2009 9:24 am
Mo. says...



Hey, I know you said you won't review other fiction, but this isn't really other fiction. I mean, it is, but it's just like a love story, without the love interest, or a fantasy fiction, without the fantasy. It's not wierd or anything. So, if you wouldn't mind, could you please review this for me?
I've rated it 16+, is that OK for you?

Hope
Mo. was here. :) mwahahaha





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Tue Dec 22, 2009 1:56 pm
Chirantha says...



Yours is done, mo. That was a nice story.

Anyone else's need a review?
Warden: "If you want to lead, all you have to do is ask."
Alistair: "What? Lead? Me? No, no, no. No leading. Bad things happen when I lead. We get lost, people die, and the next thing you know I'm stranded somewhere without any pants."
- Dragon Age

Need a review?





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Wed Dec 23, 2009 1:23 am
captain.classy says...



Will you read my story Many Knights and Days? Please? Haha: post632193.html#p632193





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Wed Dec 23, 2009 5:39 am
Chirantha says...



All done, Captain. :D

Anymore reviews needed people?
Warden: "If you want to lead, all you have to do is ask."
Alistair: "What? Lead? Me? No, no, no. No leading. Bad things happen when I lead. We get lost, people die, and the next thing you know I'm stranded somewhere without any pants."
- Dragon Age

Need a review?





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Wed Dec 23, 2009 5:36 pm
Audy says...



Hey C, I'm in need of a review :) Thoughts? Suggestions for improvement? It'd be most helpful ^^

My poem, topic55534.html please? Thanks very much I really appreciate all you're doing ^^

~ Audy





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Fri Dec 25, 2009 4:05 am
Chirantha says...



I reviewed your poem yesterday, Audy. Forgot to reply back here. :D

Anyone else need reviews?
Warden: "If you want to lead, all you have to do is ask."
Alistair: "What? Lead? Me? No, no, no. No leading. Bad things happen when I lead. We get lost, people die, and the next thing you know I'm stranded somewhere without any pants."
- Dragon Age

Need a review?





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Sat Dec 26, 2009 3:45 am
Chirantha says...



No one? :smt022 I'm sad.
Warden: "If you want to lead, all you have to do is ask."
Alistair: "What? Lead? Me? No, no, no. No leading. Bad things happen when I lead. We get lost, people die, and the next thing you know I'm stranded somewhere without any pants."
- Dragon Age

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Sun Dec 27, 2009 3:58 am
Chirantha says...



Yours is done, Oxfordand. Nice poem, by the way.

(People, try to post the link, and anything else, in this thread. It makes it easier)

Anyone else? :D
Warden: "If you want to lead, all you have to do is ask."
Alistair: "What? Lead? Me? No, no, no. No leading. Bad things happen when I lead. We get lost, people die, and the next thing you know I'm stranded somewhere without any pants."
- Dragon Age

Need a review?





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Mon Dec 28, 2009 12:32 am
nativecatcher says...



Please review mine please!Below is the link for my prologue.
topic56037.html

Thnks!
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Mon Dec 28, 2009 12:50 am
foxfire says...



can you review a work of mine...its in fantasy fiction entitled, "Marionette by the SNow"

thanks

PS
i am trying to experiment on different genres and fantasy's a new one for me...can you also comment if it had that kind of fantasy feeling??
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Tony: You won't hurt me.
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Mon Dec 28, 2009 5:19 am
Chirantha says...



I reviewed your story 'nativecatcher' and I'll get back to yours later foxfire, as I have a tuition class right now. :D
Warden: "If you want to lead, all you have to do is ask."
Alistair: "What? Lead? Me? No, no, no. No leading. Bad things happen when I lead. We get lost, people die, and the next thing you know I'm stranded somewhere without any pants."
- Dragon Age

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Mon Dec 28, 2009 9:05 am
Chirantha says...



Your story is also done, Foxfire.

Anyone else? :D
Warden: "If you want to lead, all you have to do is ask."
Alistair: "What? Lead? Me? No, no, no. No leading. Bad things happen when I lead. We get lost, people die, and the next thing you know I'm stranded somewhere without any pants."
- Dragon Age

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He began to wonder why he had felt uneasy at all. It was like a man wondering in broad daylight why a dream had appeared so terrible to him at night.
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