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Mon Dec 28, 2009 8:42 pm
Incognito says...



Hey~
If you are looking for a story to review, I have one. I need a good critique on it, and I saw some of your reviews so I thought to ask. Though it is fairly long and incredibly odd, so if you don't wish to review it, it is no problem.

Here it is:
Tick Tock

~Incognito
'Everyone is entitled to be stupid, some just abuse the priviledge.'





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Tue Dec 29, 2009 6:36 am
Chirantha says...



I'll review yours later, Incognito, because I have to go out in about 15 minutes. But I will get back and review it, as soon as I can. :D
Warden: "If you want to lead, all you have to do is ask."
Alistair: "What? Lead? Me? No, no, no. No leading. Bad things happen when I lead. We get lost, people die, and the next thing you know I'm stranded somewhere without any pants."
- Dragon Age

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Tue Dec 29, 2009 2:23 pm
Chirantha says...



All done, Inc. A really great story. Odd, but great. :D

Anymore?
Warden: "If you want to lead, all you have to do is ask."
Alistair: "What? Lead? Me? No, no, no. No leading. Bad things happen when I lead. We get lost, people die, and the next thing you know I'm stranded somewhere without any pants."
- Dragon Age

Need a review?





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Wed Dec 30, 2009 1:15 pm
Chirantha says...



No one? I'm sad again. :smt022
Warden: "If you want to lead, all you have to do is ask."
Alistair: "What? Lead? Me? No, no, no. No leading. Bad things happen when I lead. We get lost, people die, and the next thing you know I'm stranded somewhere without any pants."
- Dragon Age

Need a review?





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Wed Dec 30, 2009 11:58 pm
OxfordandOnyx says...



Chirantha! I know I'm really annoying but I saw an empty space and thought I may as well ask for another review?

It's another poem (in dramatic poetry) :)

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic56319.html

Tis called Find me, and I would like to know what your opinion is?

Thank you! :D
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1. People who use a preposition to end a sentence with.
2. People who can't count.
3. People who think it's 'clever' to quote ironic phrases.





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Thu Dec 31, 2009 3:45 am
Chirantha says...



Done, Onyx. :D

Anyone else?
Warden: "If you want to lead, all you have to do is ask."
Alistair: "What? Lead? Me? No, no, no. No leading. Bad things happen when I lead. We get lost, people die, and the next thing you know I'm stranded somewhere without any pants."
- Dragon Age

Need a review?





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Fri Jan 01, 2010 7:23 am
Chirantha says...



No one again? :(
Warden: "If you want to lead, all you have to do is ask."
Alistair: "What? Lead? Me? No, no, no. No leading. Bad things happen when I lead. We get lost, people die, and the next thing you know I'm stranded somewhere without any pants."
- Dragon Age

Need a review?





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Sat Jan 09, 2010 11:11 pm
mollytate says...



Hello. Do you think you could review an exerpt from my novel, Making Rain: Molly and Adam. It's romantic fiction. No rush. Take your time:)

~molly





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Tue Feb 09, 2010 8:41 pm
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topic58409.html

Could you please review this? TheNewHero





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Fri Feb 12, 2010 10:36 pm
KanenRenoir says...



Will you review my novel? It's the Assassin's Redemption. Here's a link:
topic58466.html

Thanks.
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Mon Aug 16, 2010 8:32 am
chetanbhasin says...



Would you like have a look at this one: How difficult life could be

It is an adventure story!
I would be glad if you review my work, How difficult life could be








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