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Fri Mar 02, 2012 1:30 am
Jas says...



work.php?id=93634

It's the latest chapter of TSBI and I've only gotten one review. SHOW ME SOME LOVE PLEASE! <3333
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~





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Fri Mar 09, 2012 4:02 pm
beckiw says...



When you have the time this - work.php?id=93804 could use some lovely Lauren attention :)

I love you FOREVAH x
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